FROM GOOD GIRL TO PURE BADASS!!!! (MLB FANFICTION BEST READ!!) UNDER EDITING

CHAPTER 1: Rejected (EDITED)

NEW READERS: This story does not make sense, this was written 3 years ago, and i feel like i make no sense, i have not been in touch with the miraculous series and updating has become near enough impossible as im currently juggling school, homework, a job and also council campaigning, so i am not updating it, a chapter has been made private, so as of now this book is dicontinued till further notice, sorry for the inconvenience.

  Marinette POV:

I was awoken by my adorable kwami poking my cheel. "Good morning Tikki" i greeted her. "morning marinett,  wow your early!!!!" she giggled, knowing she woke me up. I got up and i stripped myself, i then took threw my clothes carelessly into the washing basket. briskly walking to my shelf, taking my new clothing and run to the bathroom, where the steam from the shower i had turned on cleared my nose so i could breathe properly.

I washed my hair with "100% clean shampoo, pure softness conditioner and strawberry shortcake scented shower gel".

i dried my hair, brush it smooth, put it in my regular pigtails, i just love them so and dont feel the need to change it.I hastily struggle into my white floral pattern T-shirt. jumping around i wriggle into my pink jeggings, my gray-black jacket and my pink slip-on shoes. I packed my purse with cookies and filled my backpack with:

-my design book

-my pencil case

-my phone

- my notebook

- some Adrien magazines, you know for those moments where school gets tooooo boring

I open my purse and allow Tikki to float in. I stumble down the downstairs, kissed my parents goodbye, took a croissant and left. Today's the day . I will ask Adrien out!!!! i keep remembering the song:

  My name is Skyler
I rep the Bucks with pride
I'm probably too cool for you so friend request denied.  

i hope Adrien does not say that to me, i giggle at the thought:

 My name is Adrien
I rep the Bucks with pride
I'm probably too cool for you so friend request denied. 

i find it funny, i mean...Adrien has never been a rich snob...i mean hes rich but hes not a snob...I DIDNT MEAN TO-

OOF!!!

i fall, face flat and I look up at the person i fell on, it was Alya (you thought lol)

 thank goodness.

"Sorry Alya!"i gasp she helps me up laughing.

she had the girls with her, Mylene, Juleka, Rose and Alix. "Hey girls!!!" I greeted them.

"sup, marinette" alya asked  "i am going to ask adrien out!!!" i yell excitedly...ralizes i said it out loud made me blush a little.

  "cool!! go marinette!" i wait for adrien but i trip over Alya's feet and fall into someone, AGAIN! except this time  they catch  me , i look up to see transfixing emerald eyes. "A-adrien hehe, you look cute-i mean hot- no i mean..uhh. im sorry for bumping into you!" i smile shyly, feeling the embarrassment slightly creep onto my cheeks. "Hey marinette!" adrien said, with his regular colgate smile.

"adrien, ever since you gave  me your umbrella, your smile, your voice, your personality, it gives me butterflies in my stomach,, i have fallen  in love with you agreste..you showed me there is more to life, you're rich and yet you still find the time to hang out with us! i-i really like you...." i blurted out EVERYTHING ,overthinking, i didn't mean to maybe i went over the top....

I  look at his once smiling face..the smile that was plastered on it was faded and i could see the sides stooping to a frown, i wish i could grab tape and stick it into a smile.

"uggggh!!! your just like the other fangirls, they are like, ADRIEN! your body, adrien your smile!! adrien,adrien,adrien. damn you and your little speech because i know it too,your just like everyone else!!!!" and he walks away from me.

i collapse onto the floor, THE Adrien Agreste rejected me and got mad at me, i am not like everyone else i like him for him not his body.

"imma beat that boys ass up!!!!"  Alix yelled, "HE BETTER NOT GO NEAR MARINETTE AGAIN!!!" yelled Juleka, it caught everyones attention becaus she pretty much never talks and when she does she is pretty much silent or talks softly, but yelled. "what a jerk!" rose shrieked with her squeaky voice.

"adrien is so mean" murmured mylene, in her regular quiet voice

"that boy better watch his back!" alya stated.

"girls, it's o-ok" i said softly tears staining my cheeks and neck ,one rolling down my nose. "Marinette!! wait!" a girls voice shouted we turned to see the shock of our life.....CHLOE!!! "Chloe, please, not now!" i whimpered "i don't want to give you grief" she said rather quietly for once "oh, really are you just going to say how happy you are?" i asked "No! please hear me out!" Chloe begged, i reluctantly wave my hand and allow her to proceed.

"listen, i am so sorry for bullying you, i thought you were going to replace me, adrien was my only friend, only hope in life since my mom left, no one took the time to get to know me as i got colder and colder, me and you used to be bff's remember? you do, don't you? then my mom left and dad kept me home and adrien was my only friend for 9 years, i was only 5, but now he is going to get a mouthful from me because you deserve better!" Chloe preached, #PreachChloePreach

"oh,errr thanks?" i replied not quite knowing what to say.

"Come with me!" Chloe said, much to our surprise. we complied, hoping we were doing the right thing, we followed the tanned blondie. she called in to our school, sneakily, saying we all got sick and we went to her....MANSION.

she took us up to the spa and she got us all booked in for a full spa session we got massages, face masks, avocado hand spa's, steamed, and hot stone massages.

she got us our nails, hair and let us design our own outfits that the ladies made for us. but for some reason i was not allowed to get my hair and nails and dress... that hurt me a little... because the girls pushed me into a room, while they got ready, i didn't understand why they were leaving me out...

 then they took me out and took me to bed room named marinette......WHAT! CHLOE MAKING A BEDROOM FOR ME??

Chloe and my friends did not look any different their so called makeover was nonexistant what where they doing but, why?

they got me dressed and hair done and nails. i had black hair streaked in pink. my face contoured in a soft bronze glow.

a pink and black leather tight skin jacket over a black crop top with a shoe lace type deal down the middle it was like a bra kind of thing. and put me in black and pinks shiny leather skirt and knee high 12" high heel boots laced at the back. and i had red lipstick, black smokey eye shadow, and black winged eyeliner.

"look in the mirror girl!" alya said gasping all the girls gawking at me in awe. "thank you girls!!!" i said.

"no problem!" "time to work on your attitude!!!!" they all yelled.

i got 12 hours of attitude training.

they all finally released me to go out and be the bad ass they always knew i could be!

but....can i really do it?

DID YOU LIKE HOW I EDITED THIS? IS IT BETTER?