Everything that I now post is NOT written by me, but by a friend of mine, named JokerMyCard. He doesn't post any of his poems/rappings (or whatever you call them), but I think they're so strong that I want people to read it. Please give me feedback and tell me what to say to him. Are these good enough to post himself? Thank you!
I've seen kingdoms crumble and fall, I've seen kings that lay dead behind prison walls. They were captured and tortured some were slaughtered, the guards after daughters they caught them. then they impregnate them just to taint the blood. the castles being overthrown by thugs. back then call them vikings, or barbarians. In 2006 they'd be called terrorists. now bow and the kiss the feet of your new king. Your new ruler is so unruly. He kills a diffrent wife everyday, they just dont amuse him. Dear king what the fuck are you doing? "Fuck you peasent off with his head, I wont stop till everyone i love is dead."