We're Stuck, Duck'em!

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New chapter might be out in a few days or today maybe!  Please tell us what you think of it and what should we change to make it a little better or more better.  Any ideals for when they get to Magi or any guesses to what they are really-"You're sayig to much D.J!!"

10 Mouths:  "Okay!!  I'm just asking for help or ideas for the story is that so wrong?!"

A.J:  "Yes, if you're taking to long!!"

10-Mouths:  "Okay!" 

Chapter One: Welcome to The Mad Real World, Friends!

Louis's P.O.V

I was sitting on my bed watching Naruto: Shippuden on my laptop. Then suddenly some jackass came busting through my window right when Sakura punched the hell out of Naruto for still being immature.  It was Hana no bout about it.  I paused the movie, not wanting my sister's evil friend to ruin it with her EVIL!  "Hey Hana, you know something?  You broke my window for the third fucking time today!  Today!" I said.  I had to keep putting up cord board boexes over my window!  I started getting mad again for what she did to me this morning!  "And you know what else?  That piece of crap sword you sold me wasn't even a damn sword!  It was a bunch of small fucking cord-board boxes taped together to look like a sword handle glued to a sheath and wrapped in Christmas paper and its fucking July!" She was already gone down the hall to my sister's room.  Not even paying any attention to me.  "Hey get back here and fix my damn window!  I ain't fixin' it!" I yelled down the hall.  She didn't come back and I really wanted that window fixed.  I have to fix!  No, you said you weren't going to fix! But I just got'a!  I found myself walking back and forth thinking weather or not to fix the window!  Bugs are going to get in here and then they're going to eat their way through you brain!  Dang it!

I picked the tape up and flattened out another cord board box and taped it at the bottom of the window first. Of course the box fell off the window taking the tape with it!  And it was the last of the tape!  "I thought you said you weren't going to fix it?" She popped up at the door.  "Pay me back all my money you thief!" I yelled.  "Hey, if you're dumb enough to buy a sword from a responsible adult, than you deserved it!" She said I deserved to be robbed by an adult!  I gasped.  "I thought you were my friend." I said, trying to make her feel bad for conning me.  *Sign* "Here." She held out a roll of tape.  "It's tape, now you can tape up your window." She's still making me tape up the window!  Wow she's an incrediblily lazy ninja!  "That'll be .99 cents please!" I gasped.  It's so cheap!  "Okay!" I ran over to my money drawer and looked for 99 cents.  Not even thinking about the fact that she could rob me again.  I couldn't find any loose change though.  "Um sorry I only have dollar bills." I said.  "That's okay; I just so happen to have a penny left over from the money I spent." She's talking about the money she ripped off me!  "Here, now give me the tape." I said handing her a dollar and she handed me my tape. It felt weird though, it felt like paper!  I looked closely at it, and it looked like cut up paper with glue on it!  "Hey-!" I looked up from the fake tape and saw that she was gone!  She didn't even give me my penny!  That's it, she has tricked me for the last time!

"Hey, Hana!" I ran out the door and busted through my sister's door.  "Hey Cream, where's your evil con-artist friend!" I asked.  As usual Cream was sitting in front of the fan wearing a tight t-shirt, short shorts and tennis shoes.  "I don't know who or what you are talking about." She said, as if she doesn't hear me constantly call Hana sweevil!  "You're hiding her in here I just know it!" I started searching the place. I looked under the bed, in the bathroom, in all of her drawers, in the closet but nothing.  "Why would she be in my drawers?" She asked. 

I checked it all again, but found nothing in her room.  I narrowed my eyes at her.  She just sat calmly in front of the fan smiling like a cat.  She's hiding something I just know it!  You can never be too sure about these things the has something to do with Cream and Hana.  It always turns out badly and I get blamed for it.  I hated when thye would blame me for stuff I didn't even do and get inside trouble!  Who would like that?!!  Nobody!

"See brother, I'm not hiding anything from you." Hmm, as much as I don't want to believe it she may be telling the truth.  "Hey sis, do you like Hana more than me?" I asked her randomly.  "Uuuuuuuuuuu~!" She was like that for thirty whole seconds!  "So you really do like her more than me!" I ran out crying! My own big sister likes a Meany more than her own little brother!  I bumped into something on my way down the hall.  I looked up and it was Hana!  "Here. It's you're money." She handed it all back to me, my $21 for that cheap rip off of a sword and my 99 cents!  "I hope you've learned you're lesson! Don't just buy things without looking its quality and quantity first." Hana isn't a bad person she's just a lot of fun. And sometimes my sister gives her missions to teach me lessons, like this one, other times she's just messing with me.

"Now Louis you have to remember that or else I don't get paid." But she still likes the money.  The bitch, I take back everything I said about her just then!  "Thanks for teaching me that Ms. Lillian." I guess I should be a little more appreciative to Ms. Lillian and my sister. I know, I'll buy them something to show my appreciation. He, he,he,he.

I walked into my sister's room. "Cream, thank you for paying someone to teach me stuff you could teach me yourself." I said, trying to tell her that she could always tell me herself instead of having Hana do it.  "But than I'd have to get my butt up and walk all the way over there and talk to you in a hot freaking room then come all the way back here and sit in front of the fan." She said.  "That sounds like an extreme amount of work and effort doesn't it?" She cares so little for me that she doesn't even to put in a small fucking amount of effort for me.  "It's my turn to have the fan. Now you can just heat up in here and DIE!" I said.  I unplugged it and stood in thedoor frame just to see her reaction.  "Louis wait!  Come back I'm dying!" She did the-fake-kill-over.  I slamed her door shut like a boss and started watching Naruto again, sitting in the fan's cool breeze.

Cream came into my room and I paused the movie. She didn't have that goofey smile on her face.  "Louis," she paused.  "We need to talk." This must be serious!  Is mom and dad dead or something!?  She sat down on my bed side right next to me. I sat next to her and gulped.  "What happened?" I asked.  She toke in a deep breath.  "Gimmy that laptop, sucker!" She snatched it and leaped to the other side of the room.  "Don't scare me like that you idiot!" I yelled at her.  Thank goodness it was just her deciving me.  Wait what?!  "Give it back Cream." I jumped at her and the laptop started to glow!

"Will you two shut up?! I'm trying to count my money!  Not really I don't even have money . . . why is the computer glowing?" Hana asked and we covered our eyes when it got brighter to the point were we couldn't see.

 Chapter End~!

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