This is my first story so dont hate if i make mistakes.
Along time ago there was a little boy named Jack and he lived in a little village were him and his mum owned a Bakery.Many people visited the bakery but as jack got older he didnt want to help out there and his mum couldnt run the bakery all by his self.Jack started to get involved with girls and started partying,clubbing,drinking and smoking.His mother did not like what Jack started to be like, so he told him to move out.He got a house and a wife,2 kids.His Mum was killed by a cerial killer who has now been locked up for killing margret jones who was the cerial killers last victem.There was some gossip about the cerial killer and jack looked up all the cerial killers victems and he blinked twice looked closer at the screen and saw his mums name.The cerial killer was a man and he was cold kane.He got out of prison 3 years ago and jack was devastated that his mother had died and he wanted revenge.He got in his car and drove home as quick as he could went under his flaw board and got his pistol what shined like the sun.He said to his wife and kids im of away for a while and of he went searching for kane the cold harted killer.He started researching at the prison were he was kept.
