Hi am Ray or Rachel This is Zack We have just got out of that hellhole so this what happens after it see you in the story .
"Look it the outside Zack "Rays says"Good you have been good "Zack says they walk to the outside to see if anything has changed one of them look like they are ready to kill again the other is ready for death Zach holds he weapon ready to strike Ray He hits her and she falls to the floor bleeds out start to bleed out he get on his knees and started to cry "Thanks Zack " Rays say with a lower toned voice then she dies with her soulless eyes open Zack closes them and makes a grave for her.
15 year Later
Zack dies and meets Ray in Heaven Ray looks surprised to see him "How did you get here with all the murder you did"Ray say Happily "I stopped then kill one person a year I told God that I would try to change and I think I did"Zack Says "Come here "Rays says Zack moves closer, closer enough to were they could kiss Rays says"May I kiss you" Zack says nothing but she kiss him anyway
Zack look like he was waiting for it and he like it that he pick up Ray and says"kiss me one more time" he puts her down and walks away he chagnes in a tux and she is in a dress "we should go to the ball and Show them what we can do"Rays say with her EYES THAT HAVE A SOUL. They teleport to the ball remember there in Heaven.Zack bumb in to a person that he killed and the person turns around and YELLS run a demon got in . Zack says "am not a demon" "Yeah you are you kill me"says the jerk. "And me when you were a kid and I was sleeping and you STABED ME TO DEATH"says a girl. "You had a illegal orphanage and was going to kill me so you should be on hell how did you even get here" Zack Says with a mad voice. Zack walks away, Ray staying and start to tell everyone that he trying to chagne he is not a demon so stop being rude and she walked away to get Zack and lead him to there house Her Wings open and She fly to Zack she picks him up and fly while they are flying God tells Ray in her mind to make sure he does not find his weapon that she has in Heaven she says it out loud "Yes sir" "um what?" "Oops" Zack get kiss one the forehead "I said nothing".
Part Two will come soon but did you think I would finsh this nope not at all ok see you tomorrow because I have not made a Time for this one but there will be one soon maybe on every Friday y'all tell me.
Word count
533
P.s There is a Problem in my life so everything is going on hold bye.
Lol am just write so I can get more words right know
