The Legendary Chakra System

Chapter One (FIXED, EDITED)

He sighed, for what felt like the millionth time in that one day. It was really all he could do anymore, besides watching shows with subtitles, or reading, as he couldn't hear anymore. Except for the immortal ticking of the Clock of Death that had plagued his mind ever since birth and even got louder when he became deaf. Anime however was one of the best shows, at least in his opinion because he grew bored of the typical Japanese drama shows. He lost the ability to speak when he was four.

He sighed again. He wanted to watch Naruto fight Pein, a legendary fight to be sure. Ehh? Did the power go out? I sighed as I was surrounded by an inky black. Or, at least I tried to sigh. I felt a small jolt. Or at least, at least I think I felt it. I don't know what's going on, but I can't feel any part of my body. I had to wonder... [Did... Did I actually die..?]

Dying was a thought that he had long entertained for his entire lifespan, however short it was, of eight years. During this time, his eight year lifespan, A myriad of functions in his body had long since shut down. However modern sciences have managed to prolong his life. The inky black melted, he could tell. He didn't know how to explain it, but it seemed as if the black had... just transformed into a sphere in the center of a now stark white room. The inky black void that was the sphere had long since changed into a sentence of words and a hazy figure that looked like an eight digit number that was constantly changing. It said, " Karmic Points: ---------- ". It slowly morphed into a new sentence. The new sentence said, " Reincarnation in progress... Randomizing World... Obtaining permissions for the LCS... Done. "

-/\- The LCS is a system, basically the thing Han Jee Han has. It stands for Legendary Chakra System! (Book Facts) -/\-

Once again his surroundings have morphed. It now consisted of a warm red hue, that looked as if it reflected on water. Of course, Sōzo wouldn't know what's going on, due to him being a fetus.

-/\- Skipping Pregnancy. -/\-
The sudden loss of warmth that I had grown to love, has suddenly disappeared. Leaving behind all in the freezing cold. He couldn't tell why this had happened. However, due to the fact that it was once warm, leaving behind on in the freezing cold, And the fact that he was just spanked, makes it all the more likely that his premonition of being reborn came through. This made him happy however, he has high hopes he was not born into earth again. His hopes of being reborn into the anime Naruto had soared once he had seen the new symbol on the doctors headband. It was either that or his family loved cosplaying.

He was promptly knocked out by what he assumed was a medical ninjutsu. This was because he had seen a faint ethereal green glow on the doctors hands after he had opened his eyes. It had only been what felt like ten minutes, which was really three hours, after he had fallen asleep before a loud, faint buzzing sound woke him. He was greeted by an ethereal square with rounded edges greeting him saying

"Host Woken. Hello Host, it's me, The Legendary Chakra System! The world you are now in is one of fiction, and one called Naruto. System greets Host."

I blinked. What? I... I don't... I looked below the first box.

"GENDER ______"
"NAME _______"
"CHAKRA NATURES _______"
"Kekkei Genkai Design(?)"
"Appearance Design(?)"

I would have shouted holy crap, if not for my undeveloped lungs. Have I ever told you how good it was to hear, see, and move around? Well, you probably know. For Name I inserted Sōzo. Gender as male, obviously, and chose Fire, Wind, and Lightning as my elements(Katon, Fūton, and Raiton respectively.) As for Kekkei Genkai? There were a few I could chose from, as well as make my own adjustments or have another entirely. I decided to leave that blank for now. Appearance-wise, I chose a creamy white skin-tone, blue eyes, and black hair. Sadly, my height was forever limited to 5"4.

I took another look at Kekkei Genkai. It was a pretty simple layout.

"STAGES _____"
"Draw Appearence/ Combine Appearence(?)"
"ABILITIES ______"
"Bloodline Name _______"

Stages? Well... Nine Stages. Design wise, it would be a blue iris, and black sclera. Inside the iris, it would be a line near the outer edges, one magatama(tomoe) for each stage. It would be called the Kami no Me. It's not just a Dōjutsu(EyeAbility) however. The first two stages improve sight quality and distance, the third and fourth represent the two stages of life. Creation and destruction, Yin and Yang. The fifth and sixth, they represent master over Yin Yang. The final two give unparalleled Chakra control. The ninth, however, turned into an entirely black eye with three green magatama(tomoe), each one where they would be for the Sharingan. This gave him larger Chakra storage, an accelerated Chakra regeneration, and the ability so summon ethereal green constructs of Chakra, only being able to be destroyed by the maker. Hm... that's what I want for the Dōjutsu part. The effects, except the first two stages, stay even without it on. The same applies for the Ninth stage, however you get all the effects except the Chakra Constructs. However, with it on, no matter what stage, you get the ability of amazing Genjutsu and immunity over it.

Coupled with that, another ability like with the Obitos Sharingan, they get Kamui. They however protects and strengthens the eyes. Another special ability would be the Shinseina Kyōten. This allows for the user to have an unlimited amount of Chakra and vitality for two hours, and the only sacrifice being one of their eyes.

I confirmed the list, and immediately it said "Host received all stages of the Dōjutsu for creating it. Having children would allow them access to the Dōjutsu immediately. Nothing is needed to move onto the next stage, as the Dōjutsu itself does so when it deems the user ready." I promptly blacked out. The sight I woke to would horrify me later, for reasons unknown to you.