Now let me just start this with a friendly reminder to those authors out there that have the characters kissing the minute they wake up...like I dont know if you know this but there's this nasty ass thing called MORNING BREATH...like why would you wanna kiss someone whose breath smells like they had butt with a side of dog shit for dinner like that is nasty as fuck......so here is what the book looked like....
Olivia's p.o.v
"el and I did it last night lol,it was so great ,he even told me he loved me..I just lay there watching him sleep he looked so peaceful...just then he began to stir and his eyes fluttered open,when he saw me looking at him he immediately kissed me,he slid his tongue against my bottom lip begging for entrance ,I willingly granted him we were in a heated make out session as we exchanged and mixed saliva...." dafuq???? I swear to god the book was exactly like that lol ....just read that again people we exchanged and mixed saliva .....that is just....I cant describe how awful that sounds...there is just SO many things wrong with that paragraph it's scary....
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Dumb Law and Order fanfic monents
Фанфикi've read alot of svu fanfics and some are great but others are...not so great...so anyways i thought i should write some of the not so great moments. Hope u guys enjoy:-)
