Survivors Idea!

New Ideas!

Hello!

I have a new idea for a new survivors book! But I need to know what you think!

So, I have a OC named Pebble, she's a black, white, gray, and brown spotted Australian Shepherd with blue eyes! She has a sister named Cloud, which is also my OC!

Basically, this follows the story of Honey and Emerald, which some of you may remember from my old, deleted (canceled?...) book. It's in the future. Basically, Honey and Emerald escaped the evil pack, joined this new pack, and had pups! Now Pebble is her apprentice!

So, the storyline so far is just: A young dog ends up dead, and it seems to be a murder, it's up to Pebbles to find out who murdered this dog, and make sure nobody else falls to the dog. 

(I know it's VERY similar to the second series of Survivors, but I actually made this rough idea in a RP, before I read the second series, but, the murderer is different, characters, pack, and main character!)

I already have the murderer planned, but, I'm having trouble making up a reason to why they did this, when I created Pebbles and the murderer, the murderer's reason was OCD, but...that's just....ugh...I don't know what I was thinking, it was a while ago, but, brining mental illness into a fictional series is a lot of trouble, and I don't want to show it wrong, so I probably won't be doing this..

Now, it's time for you to help! 

Please let me know if you are interested in this idea, and if you are, feel free to leave characters in the comments if you want me to use them, and feel free to give ideas of why this murderer did this.

I'll leave the things that must be matched below, but it's basically spoilers, so IF YOU DONT WANNA BE SPOILED IF THIS EVER IS A SERIES DON'T GO BELOW

The murderer's reason must fit with their age, basically, nothing in their life could have happened before Pebble was born

the murderer must be with their parents as long as Pebbles was, the murderer COULD have had their parents outside of the pack, later to join, but just make sure the murderer and her family is in the pack in the present!

Their reason must have nothing to do with gender. 

Try to center it around a dog in the pack, or something in the pack, as this dog as probably seen most everything in the pack.

If you have a idea for the murderers reason, please message me!