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I heard the noises downstairs I didn't think much about it at first but then I heard footsteps coming up the stairs

I got worried Then out of nowhere my dad slammed the door open and walked towards me, "w.. w..what a...are you d..d..do..doing "'I stuttered

He said "NOTHING YOU OLD PIG" then he hit me and he was screaming at me! Saying "I HATE YOU ,YOU STUPID BITCH. YOUR A WORTHLESS MISTAKE " I was screaming and crying then I fell unconscious..

(4 hours later)

I woke up laying on the floor I had scars and bruises all over I was so upset I wanted to beat the crap outta my dad but I knew he was stronger than me

I went to peek my head out of my door I saw two people down there but there was only me and my dad in my family (my mum died)

I went downstairs I stood behind the person then I looked down on the floor I saw my dad on the floor dead! I kinda smiled.

The figure had tall with silk black hair And was  pale white holding a knife in his hand.

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