A.N HA HA HA I LOVE DESCRIBING THINGS MAH MAH MAH HAHAHA OKAY ENOUGH PHSCOPATH BUT I REALLY DO LOVE DESCRIBING THINGS OR OBJECTS.
If your lacking this then people will leave on your first page or second because you need too tell them how they were feeling if your word count is low then this might be the reason, I'm not saying describe everything:
Low describing
I saw her death it was scary it was sad, I walked home and slept.
WOW....THAT WAS BORING WASNT?
Normal describing
I saw Kellys death the sight made my heart pull and tug. I couldn't save her from the terrible beasts within the dark, stormy, rainy and muddy forest. I need to find the murderer of my very best friend.
I walked home feeling like a wet puddle soaking through the dirt. Once I got home I could finally let sleep make this all feel like a terrible nightmare.
THAT EXPLAINED SUFF FOR YOU DIDN'T IT?
Over describing
I saw Kellys heart sickening death my head was going mentally ill my head was twisting.
Kelly's soft smooth black hair was mashed with blood I was in fearful hate I look at my friends shining blue eyes open while I touched her heart no pusle, she really was dead.
My head slouched, my back bended over I walked home in hatered, I brushed my frizzy, soft, blonde hair. I than when to sleep so it can wash over me like clear, wet, rough water.
So if you want to have a chance do describe things I know it may have been a boring thing. Anyways describing the object may be hard just think of the positives that it makes your book have so please do, do it.
A.N Too much detail in that oh my I would never read a book like that anyways if you want describing words talk to me on that PM thing. DO COMMENT IDEAS OR QUESTIONS. I WILL BE BACK SOON
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