Author: Directionerdaddy
Reviewer: sh00kkkkk
Genre: Fan Fiction/Romance
Title: Since your title is kind of like a question, it may hook some readers to figure out "where will they go?". Which is good to bring more attention to the book 😌
(4.5/5)
Cover: You see.... When I read books on Wattpad, I want the title of the book to already be on the cover. But the problem with yours is that it isn't there 💀 It's not hard to change this so maybe get a new cover with a title there, but the picture is cute ☺️
(2/5)
Description: The description is a.... description. It writes exactly what happens, which is not bad but I feel like there is no hook in it that will make me feel interested. Use the description to try and bring people into reading the book 😁
(3/5)
Plot: I like the idea you have and even though I am not interested in One Direction it still was very fun to read 😊The only thing I want to point out is how everything went by so fast. Like your 3 chapters in the book but Harry and Olivia already have a connection just by meeting each other. And the character development may need a little tweaking but good in general ☺️
(4/5)
Grammar/Spelling: Little to no errors in writing, but if there were any I had to read the sentence all over again. Good job 👌🏼
(5/5)
Overall: The book went by so fast but in the end I liked everything. A little improvement here and there but it was overall interesting to read. If you're going to make another story please do keep in mind what I said and your story will be great 🤠
(4.2/5)
Thanks for giving me the chance to review your book! I hope you didn't get offended by my criticism 🤧💕
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