So I decided to start a new story with the help of my friend, her username is maxride07. She doesn't know I'm posting this so if you see this, sorry. I was too excited!
Here is all we have got so far. Just want to know if you are interested in the personality of the character and the plot. Note that the excerpt is so you can see the characters personality, not specifically the plot.
PLOT
Nicole and Khai (the main characters) are forced back in to time. There mission, to stop someone from preventing World War 2. As good as that might sound, it really isn't. They have to use their quick wit and bravery to stop him in time, or reality will be altered forever. With danger at every crossroad, it really is a matter of deciding what to change.
EXCERPT
Have you ever had to deal with someone so inherently annoying, that you wished that they weren't even born in the same time period as you? Turns out whoever is pulling the switches up there for me has a hearing problem, or is more annoying than the person I'm cussing out right now. I got my wish, just not the way I expected or wanted it to go. I guess I should introduce myself so you can stop referring to me as "the person" in your head. My names Nicole Wright. I live in the dreadfully rundown town of Oakheart and yes, it's as worse as it sounds. Everyone there is so old fashioned, it actually makes me wonder if someone bonked them all on the head with a rock. I tell my father and mother all the things the OTHER villages do. They're too stubborn to listen for their own good sometimes. All they care about is brute strength. Figures, since everyone in this town has a brain size of a speck of dust. Well everyone except Kai. She is the only girl, no wait, human being in this universe, other than me, that doesn't care about strength! She much rather prefers to use logic, but all common sense seems to have slipped her brain. Weird substance? Let's just taste it to figure out what it is. Don't even get me started on all her "adventures" that she forces me to participate in. Last time, we almost got mauled by a bear. I learned that day that vines make efficient ropes. I also learned that bears can climb. Luckily, there was a bee hive not too far from us. Guess who shoved it down to the bear. I'll give you a hint, it wasn't me. It worked at least. That was the fastest I ever seen a bear run, it was also the fastest I've seen both of us scramble down a tree. Unfortunately, we weren't lucky enough to be spared by all the bees.
