Camp Secret

YES OK BEFORE YOU SAY ANYTHING WHILE READING THIS

I KNOW I WRITE TERRIBLY I EVEN TOLD MY FRIENDS THAT WHEN I SHOWED THEM!!!! I'M QUITE AWARE HOW BAD MY WRITING IS!!!!!! SO PLEASE TELL ME YOUR CRITICISM!! I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW HOW TO IMPROVE!
Also.... I know Shiko sounds like Shiro but I didn't mean for it to....

THANK YOU FOR READING THIS IF YOU DID!!!!