Comforting Hands (Larry Stylinson)

Comforting Hands

Summary and Author's Notes

 WARNING: this is probably the longest AN that you've ever seen, so you can also probably skip it 

Hello everyone! 

I'm doing this completely just because I'm tired of looking for betas and I want to publish what I've written! I've worked very hard on this story (it's not finished yet, but it's very fluent at the moment). I just want people ot read this already!! I can't wait any longer for a beta (but if someone's suddenly interested -  you are more than welcome to send me a message!!!). I've been searching everywhere, posting on Tumblr and here and on LiveJournal and god knows where I haven't, but for no use. Are there no more betas in the world??? 

Anyway, this story became a real story thanks to some kind of a scene I imagined in my mind. Don't get too upsed (spoiler on the way): it was the scene after Louis was raped (you'll get the full report later) I've never taken a story (that I've written) this seriously before, so I don't really know where to start. I don't have a title to the fic, and I don't really know how to write a summary, but I've grown tired of waiting, so I'll do my best. 

This is a Larry Stylinson fiction. Currently, just very close bromance. Don't get all disappointed. I said very close and I meant it! It's defiantly rated as NC17 (there's rape, sorry. Not by Harry!). That's where my warnings come in. It's a dark!fic. Not that dark, because I'm not really good at writing it, but this isn't a pleasant, fluffy, love-birds-story fic.

(THE SUMMERY): The members of One Direction just finished yet another performance somewhere around England, and are out in a pub. Louis and the boys are set for a quiet and peaceful night, with beers, dim lights, nice jazz music at the background and just hanging out with each other... It's all great, until Louis goes out to get some air. That's where he meets Derk and his gang, the new nightmare of his life.  (<-- Okay it's the best I could do)

This fanfiction is either a very long oneshot, or a serious long story on-the-making. I'll let you know. There are currently 9 chapters ready. 

I've tried to put myself inside the characters, trying to imagine what I would do, how I would act and react, to the situations I've created for my characters. I've truly written this from my heart. I'm trying to make the readers feel what I felt when I wrote it, see what I saw... etc... I hope I've succeeded. 

Now, even though my second language is English (and British-English, at that [proud to be quarter English]), and I'm that close to be considered as a Native Speaker - I'm not. I looked all over the internet, searching for a beta, desperate to upload my fiction as fast as I can and as correct as possible, but apparently in vain. So I'm saying this now - I'm sorry, as much as I put my heart into this, my story is probably full of mistakes, like grammar mistakes, mixing different tenses in a sentence, spelling-mistakes, way too long sentences etc etc... I'm sorry, I wish there was another way, but right now - this is the situation. 

Another thing - I'm not very fond of Wattpad, so I don't really know how things work here. I'm sure it's a matter of time, but anyway I felt it was important to let you know I'm new to this. 

Anyway, I'm now going to upload the first chapter, which is three pages long, if you work by 'word'. I hope you'll like it. It might take some time to upload... I'd like to review it before and also make sure this post gets itself to you, readers, in one piece. 

Let me know what you think of the story, summary, me... whatever! If you have questions before I upload the first chapter - ask!! If there's something I love and desperately need, it's comments. 

OMDirection I can't wait to upload the first chapter!! Are you excited as I am??? probably not, but anywhooo