Troubled lover

This is a story about me and my girlfriend that my friends thought would be funny for me to write. I am not a good write so bear with me in this, it might be crap. My name is Angel and hers is Alyssa. My friends will be in the story too to add more to the story and characters. 

Set at school, Snack time
-Angel (Me)
-Alyssa (Girl [Girlfriend later on])
-Lani (Alyssa's Friend)
-Manraj (Angel's Friend)
-Steven (Mutual Friend)
-Patrick (Angel's Friend)

Angel's side

*There she was, the most beautiful girl in school. No one matches her beauty. The only thing is, I'm too shy to talk to her.*

-Patrick: "Hey buddy. Watcha staring at, hmm?"
-Angel: "Huh? Oh hey Patrick. Im not uhh staring at anything"
-Patrick: "Uh-huh. You were staring at Alyssa again huh?"
-Angel: "No! I mean yeah. Wait i meant-"
-Patrick: "Dude just go talk to her."
-Angel: "I can't."
-Patrick: "Why not??"
-Angel: "I don't know what to say to her."
-Patrick: "Just think of something. I'll help you and then you can tell her at lunch, ok?"
-Angel: "Ok."
*Bell rings*
-Patrick: "Let's talk about it more after class."
-Angel: "Alright."

Alyssa's side
-Lani: "Hey you know that Angel guy is looking at you again, right?"
-Alyssa: "Is he really?"
-Lani: "I think he might like you!"
-Alyssa: "I doubt it."
-Steven: "Hey guys, what's up?"
-Lani and Alyssa: "Hey Steven."
-Lani: "Do you know that Angel guy?"
-Steven: "Sort of? I mean I have him for a few classes."
-Alyssa: "Do you know if he likes me?"
-Steven: "I don't know. But I can ask him or -Patrick. I know he's Angel's friend too."
-Lani: "Ask Patrick. He might be more open to telling you than Angel."
-Alyssa: "Can you?"
-Steven: "Sure."
-Alyssa: "Thanks."
*Bell rings*
-Steven: "Time for class I guess. I'll ask Patrick in class."
-Lani and Alyssa: "Ok."

End of part 1