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Review 25| Misadventures with Monsters

Author: @awesomeSTG

Reviewer: @LWJessica

Genre: fantasy/action

Title: I do like this title, it is very original and I haven't found any other stories with this title. It also reflects the story line quite well and draws your attention when browsing. (5/5)

Cover: Well, this cover is good but I feel that it is very chaotic and has a lot going on, especially with the title. This could be easily fixed by removing some aspects or changing the back ground or font of title. However, it is a good reflection of the story. (3/5)

Description: This description is good overall, but I think that it is a little too long personally. I know some readers prefer longer summaries so don't worry but I personally like slightly shorter ones that leave you with a bigger cliff-hanger. That being said, it does include any information that the reader needs to know prior to reading the book. (3.5/5)

Plot: I think that the plot of this story so far is really well thought out. It has a lot of action so the reader never really loses interest. At this early stage I think that the story has lots of potential and, if you continue to write it well and have a good outline, could become a great book. However, I would focus on making sure that there are no plot holes (especially when dealing with flashbacks/forwards or any type of looking into different worlds/dimensions), you want your reader to understand what is happening and not get lost as well as take in any vital information (maybe subconsciously) for the future plot. (4/5)

Grammar/spelling: Your spelling is fine, although I occasionally come across a misspelled word, which cant be helped when writing. This is easily changed if you make sure to edit once or twice before publishing. Sometimes it can help to get someone else ( a friend or family member) to read through as they will often catch mistakes like grammar and spelling where you don't see them. Other than that everything is good. (4/5)

Overall: I think that this is a good book overall and has some great potential. My favourite scenes tend to be the interactions between Shanna and Rogue. I hope that you continue to write and keep up the good work, your writing will only get better with practice! (19.5/25)