Review 22| Back Into Your Arms

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Author: whitedandelions001
Reviewer: _Michelle_Narissa_

Genre: Romance

Cover: The pain. It sort of shows the pain that she's gone through but she's taking a deep breath and plunging into a completely different story. That's what I see in this cover and honestly? It almost perfection for this book. This book cover is already good enough so you don't have to change anything. My opinion is, you need to maybe add Liam in there with her (But then again I have yet to read the whole book lol). (5/5)

Title: The title is understandable. With all that happens in the book, Back Into Your Arms seems appropriate and what Ashley goes through, it kind of brings thoughts of how she going to act in the end. The title is just what this book needs. 😀(5/5)

Description: I just love it when people put excerpts into their descriptions. It gives the reader an idea of how what's supposed to happen is to happen. The description of the book explains everything perfectly which is what attracts readers. (5/5)

Plot: The plot is similar to many other stories I've read before, but of course, it has its differences that makes it unique. I read up to chapter sixteen and multiple times, you got my hopes up on parts that would usually lean the other way in different stories I read. Its different and that's great when it comes to a book like this. I like how you added the other characters into the plot. It makes me wonder about how its all gonna play out. The fact that you add the back story (the good parts) makes me yearn for it all to happen again. It keeps readers reading which is something you have achieved. (5/5)

Spelling/Grammar: You have no spelling or grammar errors, but you do have a little issue with when somebody is talking. I'm not going to tell you on here, but if you want to know, PM me. You can also get the book edited in the Committee's editing shop. (3.5/5)

Overall: You have great character development and your writing keeps readers captivated. I think this book is great and it doesn't need many changes. Keep writing cause you do a great job at it! (5/5)

mich



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