Laughing jack love story

Her

Her name was Gold. She was 15. She had a criminal mother who never loved her & spent most of her life in prison. Most of the rest of her family was like this as well. They were all either druggie criminals, or flat out pathetic. She lived with her grandmother who was very cruel to her. She had no friends, no caring family, no love. All she ever did was schoolwork & when she got home, all she did was read. She was alone in a dark world, where there was no light.

Gold was going to school. Like she did every Monday-Friday. Laughing jack was in a nearby bush watching her.

Laughing jack pov

'I like this one, she'll be my next victim'

She got out of school later & went home, she had her blinds up so laughing jack could see into her room clearly. He was watching from the bush right in front of her window. She was singing 'alone' by Anna blue

"My face against the window pain, a tear for every drop of rain"

"I am so lonely & so sad, your the reason that I'm feeling bad, I am so lo-"

Her grandma rushed thought the door

"Will you shut the fuck up you stupid child?!?! I'm tired if listening to your bullshit voice! It's enough I have to listen to you talk, let alone make any more unnecessary noise!"

"I'm not a child....."

"You shut the fuck up! Yes you are! Your a spoiled rotten piece of shit & I hate having you here! Why did I even adopt you after your mother went to prison again?! Why did I make you a permanent part of my life?! It was the worst decision I've ever made!"

"I'm sorry......."

"You better be sorry you worthless piece of trash!"

Her grandmother shoved her to the ground & stood over her"

'Jesus, I feel bad for this girl, & I'm about to kill her'

She had what looked like a homemade walking stick in her room. Her grandmother picked it up & started to beat her with it. Every time it came down on her face she made a little whimper of pain. After a while, her grandmother stopped when she fell unconscious. Her grandmother left her on the floor, & left the room.

'Good god! She nearly killed her, how often does she do that to her? All she was doing was singing in her room. & she sounded very good. I can't kill her now'

Laughing jack went through her window & came inside. He looked at the battered & bruised girl laying on the floor in a very uncomfortable looking position. He picked her up & put her in the bed. He pulled the covers over her & sat beside her.

'I can't believe this, I'm feeling pity for a human. This girl named Gold, is something different. She needs..........something not so negative in her life. I'll kill her, but not after something like this. I'll wait a little longer'

& with that, he went out her window, closed it, & walked away.

~~~~~~~~~should I continue this story or just scrap it & delete it?