Twilight Moon

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                       Twilight Moon

Ring! The last bell rang at school in Hawaii. People rushed out the front door and into the boiling hot sun of March. Despite being tired from class and carrying her heavy bookbag Berry ran out and turned the corner to the park right toward her mansion. As she rounded the corner to the park she saw a big gray lump moving! She stood still, frozen in place. Even though she was scared she looked more closer and saw something that frightened her in all her 12 years on Earth.

She was looking at a giant, scary, sharp-clawed mouse. She screamed. Suddenly, a blinding flash of light surrounded her. She was transforming! Into...a wolf? She was wearing a purple costume with a wolf’s tail and ears!

She was so surprised that she fell over backward. When she stood up she yelled,”Moon Tiara!” Before her floated a weapon. Before she could think she grabbed it. “Moonlight Flash!” she yelled. Then the mouse-like monster dispersed into a small regular mouse and a strange red star-looking creature. Berry had no idea what had happened or why she had transformed and yelled out those words. She felt silly wearing the outfit while fighting. When she turned and fell into a big hole that looked like it appeared out of nowhere. “I’m so dumb for falling into the hole like that,”she thought.

The edge of the hole was the color pink. When she fell into the hole she saw a pink and white room. Even after being scared to death she gaped in awe. She was in a secret laboratory. Suddenly a bright light was flashing across the room. Just then she squinted her eyes to see two dark silhouettes.

Before long the shorter one started talking,”You are one of the five people who will help the Earth.”

Then the other started talking,”With the strongest power of the five you are their leader.”

”Who me?”Berry thought,”But I’m just a normal girl. What’s so special about me?”

Then as if he read Berry’s mind the taller man said,”You are their special because you can merge your DNA with another DNA, like the endangered gray wolf you have. Aliens are causing those attacks with animals and it’s up to you to stop them with your partners. The only catch is that you have to find your 4 companions by yourself. You’ll know them when you see a thin purple glow around them that you can only see. So, Berry you must find them.”

Berry was perplexed, so the shorter man explained,”I’m Col short for Colin and my partner here is Joey. You’re supposed to find your 4 partners and defeat the aliens. We made this project so the aliens wouldn’t bother us anymore. NOW GO!”

”If I leave,” Berry said still clearly confused,”what am I supposed to do?” Now Col was fuming you could almost imagine the smoke coming out out of his ears.

He spoke out of his teeth saying,”Go up there and find your partners, possibly defeating some supernovas along the way. Now I suppose you don’t-”

”I have a question,” Berry interrupted.

“...have any questions,”Col muttered finishing his sentence. Joey just smiled.

“So, what’s your question,”Col huffed grumpily.

”First, how do I get up? Second, how do I get back to normal?! And third, what are supernovas!?!” Berry exclaimed.

“This time I’ll explain, all right?” Joey whispered to Col.

“Fine with me,” Col puffed out.