Well this is my first story on here so please comment about what you think about it or any tips or something that you think might be good to add to it . :D !!!
Oh BTW the Characters are: Lottie Winters - Toria Smith - Lottie's mum(Maria) - i havent added anyone else at this stage so yea please comment! :D
also im only 13 and writing in the perspective of a 17 yr old so it might be kind of kidish but i hope not! so yea enjoy :D!
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"This school is so weird why does everything have to be done Formal like?" I asked Toria.
She laughed beside me as we were walking out the front gates.Whitehall Academy sounds far to posh for my liking, but you would think that being here for 3 years already i would be OK with it, but no it's still as horribly annoying as it was when i first got here.
"Lottie."Toria asked.
"yea." i replied
"It's because they need to teach naughty girls like you how to behave."
It was my turn to laugh now, I'm not the most responsible. By now we were out side Toria's house as she did not live far from school. I waved goodbye and continued walking lucky me lives 45 minuets away from school and yes i walk and no i don't take the bus. For a 17 yr old girl wearing an ugly tight uniform, and a 100 tone school bag walking home seems like a lovely idea. I rolled my eyes thinking about it when suddenly i turned around
"what." toria asked.
"I swear someone was watching me." i shuddered.i can still feel their eyes upon my back.
"well come back to reality Lottie there's no one there, anyways see you on Monday, bye."
"bye" i replied. We gave each other a hug and I watched her go into her house.
"Come on Lottie stop being stupid,"I thought aloud "There's no one watching you just keep walking.
3 1/2 hours later
I couldn't bring my self to stop thinking about what happened earlier it just seamed so real Mum said i was looking rather pale during dinner. I didn't eat much either i just said i wasn't feeling well and that i was going to bed. So here i am now sitting on my bed staring at the wall wishing with all my might for me to forget, but no my brain is stupid and wont let me. Suddenly my cell phone rang. leaning over to grab it i feel eyes upon me again i quickly turn around my phone still ringing but threre's no one there.
"oh crap i must be going crazy," I thought answering my phone.
Before i could say anything someone on the other end spoke first.
"I've been watching you".
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it's not much but yea

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Midnight Beauty
Randomim crap at descriptions so u will just have to reed it to see what it's like