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He's siting in a desk away from mine. He's new to the school. I don't even know his name, but he's pretty cute. My teacher is talking away but I can't focus because if him. The bell rings time for lunch. I go out to the courtyard. He's sitting by himself I should sit with him since I have no friends to sit with. My dirty beige trench coat flies behind me as I walk. My steps slow as I notice a tall boy sit in front of him.
The really tall boy has long brown hair, while the new kid has blond. As I near the table I hear "Sammy man when's the next case!?!" The desperation in his deep voice sounded as if he was addicted. I now stand at the edge of the table. His eyes fixed on the table. His eyes now start to move up me as if inspecting what I was wearing. He stares into my eyes his eyes a fanfiction green.
"Um hello, I thought since you are new here I should introduce myself to you?" I was trying make it directed to the new kid buy it came out as a question. "Well, I'm Dean." Dean held out his hand and I took it smiling. "Castiel" It is I all I could manage because I would have fumbled my words. "I'm Sam." I turn to the awkwardly tall man. I was now the one to stick out my hand Sam took it smilling. "Do you guys mind if I sit here?" "Not at all."