System: Becoming the heroine

prologue

Third persons pov

A girl was sleeping near a cherry blossom tree she looked like a sleeping doll the servants were admiring her when suddenly she woke up "mmnh ugh nn" 'ah what a beautiful afternoon'

Then a young man walked up to her and said "Loraine you awake?" The man said who has blond and blue eyes when the girl saw him her eyes soften "yeah" the man was loraine's fiance they were childhood friends they first met when loraine's father hosted a banquet...

Loraine was the heiress of the Leng coorporation she has a half sister her mother died while giving birth to her so that's why her father met another woman and was in love with her... Loraine's step mother loved her more than her real daughter that's why her sister hated her... 

"loraine uhm I have something to say to you i hope you wont get angry" loraine's fiance said while looking at her nervously "oh what is it?" loraine said lokoking at him expressionly "loraine the thing is lets end the engagement I dont love you anymore" he said when he looked at loraine's expression she looks like she was about to cry so she immediately laugh and said "oh do you have another lover then? you must at least give me a  reason" loraine said to him but she looked at her he immediately froze and was stunned he said nervously "loraine I love your sister and want her to be my only wife Im sorry" the he left leaving loraine there stunned then she burst rivers of tears 'why did they did this to me did I do anything wrong?' a lot of thoughts immediately went in to her mind but she didn't notice that a pair of evil eyes saw everything...

'hmph that's you deserve for taking everything from me after this i'll kill you hahahah' loraine's sister said smirking evilly while lookinbg directly at loraine...

After that loraine's sister assigned a lot of gangster to make her sister dead...

loraine told her parents that she was going shopping and will be back before dinner.. when she arrived at the mall some pair of hands suddenly grabed her and she lost her consciousness..

2hrs later

loraine woke up with a bad headache and she noticed that she wasn't at the mall she observed her sorrounding and saw 6 men looking at her "who are you?" loraine said to them with a killing intent "oh were the one whi will kill you today" they said while smirking at her "who sent you her?" she said but they just remained silent because they shouldn't tell their investors identity so when they didnt respond a someone immediately went to loraine's head her sister after that the men took a whip and slashed it at her loraine screamed so loud because she was very sensitive when she get's hurt after feels like years of whipping to her they grabbed a knife and slashed it all around her body all loraine could think about was getting revenge...

Loraine looked at her body and saw that she looks like a bloody mess right now but she endured it then finally they took an axe and took out each of her finger and sliced her tounge "ahhhhhhhhhhh" loraine screamed with full of hatred and died because of bloodloss...

when her parents heazrd that they're daughter died they immediately went to where they found loraine's body and her step mother cried river's of tears when she saw the unrecognizable loraine when her sister saw her she looked like shocked from her sister's death but her eyes betrayed her and her eyes are smiling with joy so after that.. 

Because of loraine's death her sister took control of the company and her ex fiance helped her when her ex fiance received the news he was sad and filled with regret knowing that he was the cause of her death but when loraine's sister saw him like that she coaxed him and he immediately forgot all the pain and they lived happily ever after....

 so what about loraine we'll find out soon... :0 :) 

author: so guys hoped you liked it and please leave out some comments so I can know more about your thoughts..

EXTRA CHARACTERS TALKING

loraine: author why did you let me die like that huh do you want me to kill you instead!

author: wuu loraine's bullying me just wait loraine there's more coming wuu..

loraine: you better let me live or i'll shred you to thousand pieces..

author: ahh I'm signing off wuu or i'll die early because of you..

loraine: hmph i'll let you off so you can write a wonderful story about me

author: yey guys comment down below what you think will happen next fufufufufu..

loraine: you look like an idiot whatever i"ll just sleep bye readers ;)

author:bye too readers mwuahh...