My great life

Chapter 1 "paul"

Danny come here please said Paul. Paul was the kings son which made him the prince and was rich. He had 2 maid sally and fanny. Paul was very fond of Sally but not of Fanny was wicked and hated Paul. Paul had often tried to fire Fanny but Paul's father was friends with the awful maid and brought her back. The two butlers were all friendly.

Im coming Paul said Danny. 2 minutes later Danny appears yes Paul. BRING ME WATER I SHOULD NOT HAVE TO WAIT! Screamed Paul to Danny. I know sorry Paul wont happen again. Good said Paul.the day passed silently until 1 o clock when Paul's friends jack,jenny and Kate came. Hiya Paul said all his friends. Lets go to the lake today said Kate. Ok we will bring a picnic with us said jack. Fanny called Paul bring me a picnic. NO said fanny. I will sally shouted as she was upstairs. I like sally but not the wicked fanny said Paul. I feel the same said jenny. Anyway lets go here is the picnic said Kate and all left the the house hurry away we go

Chapter 2 the cave

What shall we do first asked jack. I know fish said Mike we have 2 rods we can take it in turns. They all sat happily eating and fishing they cot 2 fishes and 1 crab! What shall we do now said jenny rather tired with the heat and within 5 minutes one by one each child fell asleep.they were asleep an hour when suddly all four children awoke because a scream then another. By this point someone was shouting help. All four children jumped 2 there feet and ran to find somewhere to hide as they felt sure this might be someone kidnapping. They found a cave where they hid for a while. In the cave was quite nice there was a stream lots of rocks to sit on and a big stone table. This will be our new hangout said jack

Why yes it could said Paul. Fine then yets go back and get some stuff for are new hangout like rugs and games said jenny. So off they went to get some rugs and games it took an hour to take 1 load off stuff. Come on said jack lets go and bring our last load hold on 1 minute said Kate I'm tired from the first load lets take a break.they took

A 10 minute break then went on to the house to get the load. Lets bring our dinner with us said Paul. Danny bring us are dinner please. 5 minutes later the children had everything collected there dinner and on they went.when they arrived the all got a horrible shock! someone left a bag there who could be here said jack. the opened the bag inside it laid a knife. AHH! screamed Kate there is blood on top of the knife.

Part 2 now out