Hello everyone this story is still under construction, im sorry for the bad writing, im not very good but im trying.
I hope you all injoy the re write of the first chapter - A.JA house stood apon a hill surrounded by others, these houses are not like the house that stands opon the hills peak, The hollow house was warm once, full of life but now its a dilapidated and empty facade, Its a cold shell that is waiting for a new family to make a home in its walls, The house eagerly waits for the new occupants, to revive the heart of the home and maybe something else within. The house will soon be occupied, the sold sign out the front confirms that.
The Silver family slowly makes there way to the hollow house, a new home, a new start.An old mansion was coming into view from the car window, "ugh its horrible, look its all covered in vines and the fence is broken, it looks like dump, i cant believe we are going to live here "Jackson said in frustration, "Jackson just imagine the history of this place, maybe someone got murdered in the cellar" Ashton said with wonder and excitement lacing her voice.
They continued to argue while they slowly inched closer and closer to there new home, And with that i welcome you to the Silver family, Ashton Silver a weird bookworm with a reputation for trouble and her brother Jackson Silver, hes know for being protective over his little sister and he is always being dragged into Ashton's stupid and crazy adventures."Woah" Ashton yelps in excitement as they pull into the drive way of the mansion.
"Both of you go pick your rooms and then come down and help me unpack the rest of the stuff" Mrs Silver said in a tired tone. Both of the Silver children raced out of the car and through the front door, As soon as Ashton's foot passes the threshold of door she feels a unsettling shiver run down her spine, "this house is unsettlingly cold" Ashton mumbles under her breath, Ashton slowly takes steps toward the stairs weary of her new surroundings. She makes her way up the stairs to find a long dim hallway, like something you'd find in a horror movie...After a long weekend of moving in, The Silver children get ready for there first day back to High school.
~Ashton's P.O.V~
Oh god i cant believe that its first day back to school tomorrow and i know absolutely no one, this cant be happening i cant hang around my brother all year again.. you know what will get my mind of this, reading out side in the fresh air , yeah that's what I'll do i say as i rush out my door with my book in hand and Jackson in tow. Once outside i found a nice tree to climb as i did so, Jackson started to mess around with his soccer ball which ended up hitting me and i fell out of the tree i was reading peacefully in. I screamed in pain as i land on my arm, "shit Jackson get mum" i said though sobs.~Jackson's P.O.V~
Oh god i messed up bad , now im here waiting for Ashton in the hospital.
She freaking broke her arm when she fell out of the tree she was perched in. Oh god here she comes, "Ashton im so sorry im a bad brother-" i go to continue but i get interrupted by Ashton stiffling a small laugh, "it's fine Jackson" she says with a toothy grin.
~On there way home~
"So Ashton you ready for school tomorrow i said with a laugh.
You know you need to get your self some friends of your own sis.""Ugh Jackson i know for god sakes
But i stuggle with being around people i dont know and you know that, So i highly doubt that I'll be having friends any time soon and you alway have Clyde so you dont have to worry" Ashton says as they pull up to the house.~Ashton's P.O.V~
I get out of the car and I'm meet suddenly with anothers that where a beautiful ivy green colour.
U-uh hi there i say
"Hello!, So i hope to see you at school" she smiles, see yah she yells in a rush as she runs across the street.
"Ha Ashton you're blushing" Jackson said in a mocking manner.
"Oi shut your stupid mouth i swear to god if i didn't brake my arm you would be dead right now i growl at him."~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
And thats where im leaving this chapter i hope you injoy I'll be working on the next chapter and I'll release it as soon as possible:D.
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Hollow House
Mystery / ThrillerStory is under construction Hey Everyone this story is about two siblings Ashton and Jackson Silver and their friends Ashton and Jackson are moving back to their early childhood home/mansion. Some crazy stuff ends up happening which includes myste...