If I Tell You a Secret, Will You Promise to Keep It? (Completed and Re-editing)

Episode 22 - The End of Melanie? | Part 1

(Edited)

Katie's POV

Mel hasn't told us anything about Louis and the witch, so Audrey and I decided to go look for a cure.

I swam West, into the pitch black darkness that is called the sea.

I swam forever on. Occasionally, I would see some coral and a few large rocks but that's it.

Into the distance, there was a figure that looked like one of the girls.

(K for Katie M for Melanie and A for Audrey)

K: Audie? Mel? I think I see you!

A: Really? I'm back on land to check on Niall and Eleanor.

K: Well I see someone. They have a tail! Talk to you later?

M: Sure! Tell us how it's goes!

K: Ok. gtg.

M/A: Bye

"Hey! you!" I yell to the girl who was swimming. She looked flustered, as she looked around for a place to hide but settled in fetal position.

"It's ok, I'm not here to hurt you." I say, patting her back.

"Unhand me, peasant!" She yelled, flicking my hand away.

"Sure, I will leave you here." I say, swimming away slowly.

"No, no. stay with me until I find Crimson!" The girl yelled, swimming after me.

"Who are you and who is Crimson?" I ask, leaning in slightly to show I was paying close attention.

"Well..."

Audrey's POV

I dried off my tail and grew legs again. I couldn't find anything and we were swimming for what, 2 maybe 3 hours?

I stood up and walked back to the villa. Since the door was unlocked, I could just slip right it and looked outside.

Outside, I saw a knocked out Niall floating in the pool, with a bloody hose and ear. After walking a little closer, I saw something no one was going to like.

Elounor was making a comeback. Yay? Ah, no.

Eleanor was straddling Louis, her arms wrapped loosely around his neck. Louis had his arms wrapped around Eleanor's waist, somewhat pulling her closer. They were making out, and Louis was topless. Yes, topless. The temperature must have raised a few degrees...that is how hot he is. Wait, I have Zayn! The hottest bish in the world! Back off, Audrey!

I stormed outside, watching the ex's sucking face as I kicked El in the stomach.

She rolled off him in pain, clutching her stomach, probably hoping her lunch wouldn't come up.

Louis stood up and turned to me. He grabbed me by the arms and whispered in my ear.

"Try anything and you're fried fish." He says, backing away and going to help the witch.

"Louis...what did I do? I didn't do anything to her!" Eleanor whines, hoping Louis would do something. She may have thought that she stood a chance against Mel, but definitely not me.

"Leave. You aren't wanted here, Audrey. No one wants you here. Not Mel—I mean Melanie, not Katie, oops, Kaitlynn and certainly not Zayn. Why don't you just leave?"

I know he was just under the witch's spell, but it still stung. Louis is my friend! Well, was...

"Louis," I say, my words getting caught in my throat. "This isn't you, and you know it. Fight this. You can do it!"

"Pssh. I was under a spell all the other times. Nothing you can say anymore has an effect on me." He smirked as he turned around and pulled Eleanor inside.

Wait, Melanie is in there!

If he does anything...off with his head.

Eleanor's POV

I smirked. Anything I ask Louis to do, he does! I love it, I love it, I love it! He does everything I tell him to! Plus, I could use him to get rid of Melanie once and for all...

Melanie came down the stairs. She had tear-stained cheeks, blood-shot eyes and sniffled. Her hair was in a tight pony tail, and she was wearing a long sleeve black shirt. Who wears black in the middle of Summer? Freaks.

She hid a small oval shape red object behind her back and walked past me, bumping my shoulder and moving on.

Perfect.

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Hey guys! I wrote this when I didn't have wifi, so I wrote it in notes, and I don't know if the font shows up for not but it is the notes font! So, yeah....

I got braces yesterday!

*curse word*

They hurt like a biiiiiiitch! Icant eat anything! I can suck on applesauce and drink soup...but that's it.

It sucks!