Author: @SydPanda5
Reviewer: @LWJessica
Genre: fantasy
Title: I love this title, I think it is very professional and captures attention. Well done! (5/5)
Cover: I think your cover is nice and reflects the story well. However, I think that it is lacking something. It needs a bit more intrigue, maybe put a person or an object in as well? Other than that it is good. (3.5/5)
Description: I like how you started the description with a quote from the story, it was very eye catching. I also like how you included a bit from both point of views and set up the story nicely. It was a nice touch to add the reviews by other people. (4/5)
Plot: I love your plot, it is a very good book idea and has loads of potential. The only flaw is that the chapters change their focus quite a lot and you seem to not have an overarching aim for each chapter (if you don't plan already then it would easily solve this, if you do plan then I suggest re-reading your story to see if you could add a few things to give each chapter a mini goal). Having said that the plot is great and I can't wait for the next book. (4.5/5)
Grammar/Spelling: Well, I think your grammar is ok but it could benefit from varying sentence length a bit more and using some more adventurous vocab to upgrade your story even more. I know that you are in the process of editing so this will most likely be resolved anyway but I wanted to point it out. You will also get better at spotting places where you can add different secentece types as you continue writing, as they say 'practice makes perfect' and that goes for writing so the more you do it the better you will become (that goes for all of us so don't worry :D). (3.5/5)
Overall: I really like this book and I look forward to reading the next one. Keep it up!! (20.5/25)
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