cigarette

He let out a puff of smoke. The only thing I could see through the fog, were his dark, emotionless eyes.

I'm completely nervous. Scared even. I don't know what to say or do. Temptation is keeping me here... With him.

"How old are you kid?" He asked. His voice sounds so deep and rich, like a base almost. I couldn't help but shutter at how sexy he sounds.

"I'm.. Ei-eighteen.." I managed to reply. He gave a slight smirk at my stuttering. He almost looked amused.

"Well kid, what's your name?" He asked, then gave a few puffs of smoke again.

"James." I said rather too quickly. I know I'm blushing Crimson red of embarrassment, but I can't help it... He's so... Attractive.

"James," he breathed out. It sounded like music to my ears. "I'm David." He finished.

He let out another puff of smoke. The intoxicating scent is making me extremely anxious. His cold eyes are scanning my body up and down. I know what he wants.

"How much James?" He asked. I couldn't help but feel pain at the pit of my stomach. It hurts to do this.

I know I shouldn't be feeling this, but David... Hmm... David.

"$140" I replied a tad flirtatious. I have to show that I'm not this shy quiet boy.

He has to know that I'm worth his time and money.

He stepped off the wall he was leaning on, and moved closer to me. It was dark out, almost midnight. The only source of light came from the light post a few feet away.

I could see his facial hair. I could see the dark circles under his eyes. I could see the smirk on his face. I could see his dark eyes, looking at me hungrily. Avidly.

"Let's go." He said. And with that he took one more puff, he threw his cigarette on the floor, and put it out.

I stayed there, staring at the white now-flat object.

After a second of standing there, I moved quickly and followed David to his car to do my deed.

I have to be back soon, for the next customer, hopefully someone who doesn't make me feel like this.

Someone who isn't David.

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So I re-wrote this. Not everything, but I just fixed it.
From my perspective, It seems to me that James likes David. But how can a Prostitute like a stranger in an instant? Maybe love at first sight. Maybe soul mates. Maybe they knew each other before?
Well, who knows.
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