24. Exsanguine

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I experimented with a random different narrative style and I tried of a 'what if this was on screen' mood, I hope you enjoy it

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Color Scheme: Reds, Black, White, Gray, faint dark cool hues

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They said she was a little mad. She's dead. Broken, gone. insane. frighten. help. sorry. help her. A girl was walking in the forest and she just disappeared. No one ever found her. they say she drowned. do you know who she is? they hear screams in the hospital she died in. her passing was hurting everyone in the family and the mother stopped eating after a while from grief. she was pregnant during this period and eventually, the child within her died as well. they ripped the dead child out of her womb. she cried and cried but soon enough the family forgot of the children who died. the people say they can hear the screams and wails of the two when you enter the hospital at night. they say they still roam the place even after the abandonment of the area. the girl is looking for her dead sibling forever in a cycle that will never end. her grave is in the forest where other hospital patients are held. you can hear them scream and shout in pain at night they say. the skies are eternally dark and these people will never return home. Can you hear her?

B/W shades scene of a destructed city. In the midst, we see a girl. Girl is the only one in color, black clothes, and bright red hair - dyed.

Girl looks around the place with fear in her eyes. A rush of wind, she closes her eyes, blinks. 

Scene of her boots on the muddy ground, she steps.

We see her eyes and hear her gasp

She's suddenly in a room and everything goes dark. When the lights turn on bodies are hanging from hooks, lights go out again (repeat 8 times, every time gets faster). Then viewers are greeted by a ripped face and hear a scream when lights go on for the last interval, lights flicker and show the girl again looking scared.

The girl continues to walk she hears the distant cry of a baby and she frightenedly tries to look for the baby. There is a flash of light and the bodies are back but more compact and abundant and she is short of breath and the light fades out.

Light fade back in and the girl is in a (different) smaller room, there is a tall medical desk and the crying is louder. The girl sees the silhouette of a baby moving, she rushes to the desk and is horrified to find the baby not moving anymore. She blinks and the baby is dissected open.

She screams and runs back, then she hears the sound of flesh rip and the lights go out. The lights return and the sound of thick liquid pouring is heard, a bloody bare womb is shown without a body accompanied.

Suddenly the now intact womb lights up (light source is from a medical lamp) and the shape of a baby is seen. As the lights flicker again we hear wailing from an outside source and the baby's heartbeat is in the girl's ears. The heartbeat quickens and she holds her head as in pain, and the light is finally still as the womb shakes and a sound is heard as we see a splatter in the womb. The womb rips and the fluids slide out and doesn't stop.

The girl screams and she is now in a new place. It's a forest and the sound of wailing is heard, there is a trail of blood on the grass, and stains on the trees. The girl looks up as bodies hang on the branches.

The screen goes black

The girl is on the gray ground she holds flowers. She suddenly is heard choking and looks worried as she struggles for air and she slowly sinks into the ground and viewers hear violent screaming in the background.

The girl is in the ground except for only part of her right arm is left above ground, posed as if drowning and looking for help. The arm is moving frantically until it slowly stops moving and is still. The arm is left sticking out unmoving.

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⏰ Last updated: May 26, 2019 ⏰

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