Choke me Daddy/ J-Hope Fanfic

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Hello and welcome to my first ever BTS fanfic. Please tell me your opinion on this. I'm always open for constructive feedback 😊💜

His dark eyes were tracing my body up and down before coming up to me. His body moving as if he were dancing, his red dyed hair basically glowing under the clubs lights. To be honest.... he scared me. But for some odd reason I liked that. He was intimidating and I wanted him to do things to me that had never gotten into my mind before.
J-Hope was probably the last person I expected to hit on me but here i was already shivering and getting goosebumps all over my body. 'Come with me' he mouthed walking past me towards the door. I couldn't help but obey his offer. I wanted him to do things to me, give me pleasure and release. But I was just about to find out how much he would teach me in that matter. And also about myself.
I followed him out of the club, passing bodies rubbing against each other. I don't even know how I was convinced to come here. I hated watching needy people getting off on the dance floor. And I didn't even enjoy dancing. Neither did I enjoy drinking which was usually the first thing people did at this club. And now.... me, a 19 y/o virgin, was following one of the biggest and most wanted playboys out of a nightclub, getting jealous glances thrown at me with every person I passed on my way to the exit. He was known for not being picky when it came to genders so even the men were looking at me with unamused expressions.
What was I doing? Like... seriously! I never felt like this before. But Hobi was driving me crazy tonight. I guess this is what people call sexually frustrated.
Outside of the club the cold night air hit me without warning leaving me with more extreme goosebumps than I had in the first place. "Hobi... what do you want?" I asked shivering from the cold and something else deep inside my core.
"You caught my eye in there princess. I never noticed you around here. But right now I want to have fun with you. You look sweet in those shorts and I just can't resist a nice ass."
I started blushing. And in a matter of seconds I felt a heat rush through my body starting at my inner thighs and working it's way up to my face. His voice turned me on like crazy. My mind wanted to resist but my body took over, walking towards him in a very slow pace. His eyes were locked on my hips glowing with lust and as soon as I was close enough for him to reach me, he turned us around so I was against the side of his car. He started pressing his hips against my core which made me whine from pleasure. I had never felt a sensation similar to this and I loved it. He pinned my hands over my head with one hand while his other was tracing down my chest squeezing my left breast making me moan. I laid my head back against the car biting my lip trying not to let any more moans out of my mouth but as soon as he reached the lining of my shorts and made his way under my underwear I couldn't help but gasp. "You are so wet already and I didn't even start properly. Do you want to cum from just my hands? Or do you want more?" My knees were weak and I couldn't form a sentence to answer his question. "I can make you feel good you know? But you have to tell me what you want..." he said grinning at my bodies response to his touch. I freed one of my hands and pulled his out of my pants. I was breathing heavily but finally started to catch my breath. My lids fluttering from arousal. "I want you to show me what pleasure means. I'm not experienced in these kinds of things" I said glancing up at him through my lashes. He smiled slightly. "I haven't had a virgin in a while. This could be fun."
He picked me up and sat me down in the back seat pushing me down onto the leather. He pulled me towards him so my legs were hanging off the seat positioning himself so he could get rid of my shorts. Looking at him I could tell that he was getting hard already from just taking off my clothes. I never thought I could have such an effect on someone. After undressing my lower body, Hobi pulled me up and took off my shirt with his experienced hands leaving me with only my bra. I took my chance to pull up his shirt but he stopped me right away. "Do you want to get punished princess?" His eyes were even darker than before. He wasn't kidding so I just laid my hands down beside my bare body. He kneeled down between my legs leaving kisses from my right knee to my inner thigh before caressing the other side. "Hobi...." my body responded with a feeling I had never felt before. I wanted to scream in pure bliss but at the same time I didn't want anyone to hear us out here. Still sitting up right I tangled my fingers in his hair pulling on it as he started to lick my most sensitive spot.
As soon as he felt my hands pulling his hair he slapped my thigh. "Don't you dare touch me princess. Or else your punishment will be much worse than this slap." He started pleasuring my spot even more but after him leaving a handprint on my thigh I tried to contain my arousal by touching myself. I didn't want to risk more marks on my body. I let my body fall back onto the seats and started massaging my breasts while Hobi licked my clit. A gasp escaped my lips when he started to pleasure me with his fingers as well. This man definitely knew what he was doing. Because just as my body tightened to cum he stopped moving his fingers inside me and got up. He had started to unbutton his pants and removed the layers of fabric containing his hard member. I was so exhausted from almost reaching my orgasm and my mind was clouded from pleasure as he thrusted inside of me. My eyes widened at the sudden pain I felt and a scream escaped my mouth. Hobi was panting as he felt my body tighten around his member. "You are so tight princess. I almost forgot what it feels like to take a girls virginity." Just as he said that he started moving his hips against mine leaving me a moaning mess. He filled me out completely and it felt too good to be real. I let my head fall onto the seat arching my back in endless pleasure while Hobi's hands found their way up to my neck. He thrusted in me with a fast and steady pace which made me go crazy. I wanted to feel him even more so I reached out to touch his chest with my hand but as soon as he noticed he pinned my hand down and started to constrict my breathing right as I was about to climax. It was an insane sensation that I felt inside of me. Never had I thought being choked could feel so dangerous but yet so good at the same time. He started to choke me even harder right as I came. My head felt dizzy and my entire body was shaking underneath his strong grip which caused him to cum inside of me growling into my ear as he collapsed above me. He loosened the grip around my neck allowing me to breathe freely again. Laying there panting and gasping for oxygen made me feel so good and I knew I wanted more. More of Hobi and more of his dominance that turned me on so much. "Please.... choke me again daddy." I whispered under my breath before blacking out underneath him.

Well.... that was a ride. Ngl this is my first kink inspired ff so please don't be too rough (🙂) on me with this one.