JOURNAL (Manga/Anime script) (Improvised)

This is my first ever manga/anime script that I made in my life, complete. I dont really know how you guys feel about this script, but for me, I love it. I have completed this script a long time ago and I decided to just improvise on it. Please vote and comment so that I can improve. Please Read and Enjoy!!! PLEASE VOTE AND LEAVE A COMMENT ON THIS FIRST CHAPTER!!! 

                                     Chapter 1

“Ready?” A man said with a steady voice

“Yes,” Yusuke said with assertiveness

“Good, then you know what to do, right?” The man asked, he already knew the answer but somehow he still needed to ask.

“Of course,” Yusuke answered with a cocky voice.

He went out of the car and the vehicle drove away.

“The sweet smell of freedom,” He took a deep breath and stood in front of a house while staring at it.

He went inside and inspected the messy house. Boxes were scattered around the place, one of them stated ‘fragile’.

“There are a lot of things to be done before the day ends.” Yusuke said to himself frowning, he then started unloading the boxes.

“I am Yusuke Tokotaru, I live in.... Well, everywhere in Japan. I am 17 years old and I started working ever since I was 14 years old.” Yusuke narrating, “My job is to play cupid in front of the couple I was assigned with, and I act like the Goddess of Love who I am not. My true self is actually rude, obnoxious and sarcastic, but people think that I’m some kind of a saint,” He continued, “because I help them with their possible love partners” He added with some sarcasm in his voice, “But so, this is my life...”

The doorbell rang...

“I just got here!” He said, irritated as he was disturbed from fixing his stuffs, “Who the hell might that be?!”

Yusuke went towards the door, stomping his feet as he walk. He opened the door.

“Good afternoon!” A lady greeted, she was just outside the door and she had a big smile on her face, “My name is Hitomi Nagasuki.”

“What do you want?” He snapped at her.

“Uhh-uh, I brought you a pie-” She said, still in high spirits but a little shocked and discouraged, “-to welcome you in the neighbourhood.”

“Thank you, but I don’t like pie,” He said with sarcasm.

“W-Well, I have muffins-“Her smile slowly fading, “-do you like muffins?”

“Nope.” Yusuke quickly slammed the door before she could say anything else,

“Geez, that girl’s really annoying.” He said with a relieved voice.