<P class=MsoNormal>Okay, i was on a writing frenzy cause i finally finished my exams :) umm yah can't think of anything more to say, except give whatever feedback you want. Oh yeah, my spacing was really weird so i'm not sure how it will turn out on here :/ </P>
<P class=MsoNormal>Anyways yeah, in the paragraph with the Aussie slang, yes i know there are spelling mistakes its supposed to be that way :) anyways enjoy :)</P>
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<P class=MsoNormal>"Oh my god, are you seriously locked out?" he asked. I didn't say anything and he started shaking with laughter.</P>
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<P class=MsoNormal>"Be quiet or I shall throw another pot plant at you!" I threatened. He laughed even harder at that and I let my lips pull up into a smile. But seriously I was not amused. I was bloody locked out of my room. I held back my hyperventilating for later.</P>
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<P class=MsoNormal>"Ohmygodmymotherisgoingtokillmeandsheissogoingtoguesssomethinghasgoneonanddamijustgotmypocketmoneybackbutthendad'sjustgoingtoactalldissapointedbutthey'llprobablyseemeontheparkbenchwhentheygofortheirwalk."</P>
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<P class=MsoNormal>What was I going to do? I'd never really roughed it outside before, would I have to mug someone for a coat. Cause I was still in my beach clothes which consisted of my still slightly damp swimmers and my denim shorts and t-shirt. And I was going to get eaten alive by the mosquito's.</P>
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<P class=MsoNormal>"Whoa, chick, slow down. Look you can use my phone to call them. But you have to come up with your own lie," he sighed, reaching into his pockets. He flipped his hair again and I cringed. Man I hated it when guys did that. </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal>"What?" he asked, looking at me angrily. I looked up and saw him waiting for an answer. Ha, he saw me cringing. Haha maybe I won't tell him, I thought.</P>
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<P class=MsoNormal>"Don't worry," I thought. </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal>"And dam I can't cause my parents are from the Stone Age and don't have mobiles," I cried. I sat down on the curb and tossed my hair. I took a deep breath to calm myself down.</P>
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<P class=MsoNormal>YOUR PARENTS ARE GOING TO MUDRER YOU, my brain screamed at me. I moaned and slapped my palm to my head. </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal>"um, chick calm down. Pshhhhhh, I guess you can come home with me," he said. From the way he said it, he sounded horrified by what he just said. The feeling was mutual.</P>
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<P class=MsoNormal>"What! Oh no, no, no, NO. I'm ugly, I'm not sleeping with you," I shouted. His face dropped in a perfect 'o'.</P>
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<P class=MsoNormal>"Okay first of all, yes your right about being ugly," I laughed at that one, "but ewwww, I don't want to sleep with you," he said disgusted. </P>
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Fate Happens
Teen FictionWhen Ellie was 14 she was mugged while on holidays, but instead of screaming for help she ended up stealing money from her parents and giving it to him so he could create a better life. Now two years later back at the same coastal town on holidays...
