The first author in this little "critique book!" Battle_penguin54.
First off let me say how much I love your books. Not just the shipping but the heart and soul poured into each bit of the story. I can tell by the way it is written and crafted that you put so much effort into it. I cannot imagine that burden to write so well, especially with knowing other difficulties by reading your poetry lines of pressure and such.
Let's compare your books to say, baking a cake.
You start by the book, the original game. Then you take the twist of a different AU, which makes it all more enjoyable.
Then, you add each "ingredient," to the story line. Picking the best out of every character.
While progressing, you make the batter (story) smoother and more clear. It all blends in wonderfully to create this complex and fascinating story.
Each day I wait eagerly for your next book, impatiently reloading the page from time to time. (Once I did it for an hour, no joke XD) I cant describe the sensation and kick I get out of reading those stories.
I hope to go to the library one day and see a professional book published by you, Battle_penguin54.
I hope to read and experience each new book you bring on.
I hope to talk to you more in the future, getting deep about plot (and other random crap of course.)
I wish you the best of luck.
And I will totally sponser money for you if you get to that point.
:)
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