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My cat i have entered is Sunpatch this is the story.

Sunpaw had to go and gather moss for the elders AGAIN! She was getting annoyed. She had got to the tree and stepped on something and heard a hiss. She jumped.back.

" Watch were you are Steping" the cat hissed. He smelled of a loner. She hissed and pinned him."Whoa whoa whoa!!!" He yelped. "PLEASE NO PLEASE NO!!!" He pleaded. "I will leave never come back just don't!" He yelp.

She felt bad for the loner even though her mentor told her to never let a loner go with out paying for being here. She didnt notice but her mentor was in the bush. "FINE but dont tell." She mewled now with a smiled.

The loner ran and hermentor jumped out."Why did you let him go!" Her mentor hissed.

"You will be punish!" He hissed. (He mentor is DF btw) " your Cerrimony will be put off for a moon and that moon you will spend in camp and getting moss thats all."

I may inprove it! But thats it!

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⏰ Last updated: Oct 07, 2014 ⏰

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