the hot flame story

the best day ever

I ran down stairs with my backpack my alarm went off late . I  ran outside chase my bus down got on and sat by a girl  i like name brook .she said some thing to  me I could not understand her of the noise on the bus i could see her say my name very slowly tom tom then I felt there was some thing  like a spark between us . i should not be crashing on her she like out of my lead plu s she is nick west girl friend . i was Lucky to get on the bus my dad died in a fire my mom has no job i had to work week ends  just to pay some bills and get some food.

                       me and nick west are best friends  we are one of the poplar kids in school .Nick west make out behind brooks back . I will treat her right if she gave me a chance . i meet a girl name  autumn she cute, funny and she listens to me about my problem . 

I think she likes me she looks at me with those cute bright blue eyes. I should ask her out for the dance on Friday witch is next week .