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Hey everyone! So this is my first piece of work so be patient!! Still trying to figure everything out!! I'll list the characters of the first chapter below:

'Leo (short for Leonard) best friend of Jared and RJ. 21 years old, Plays basketball and lives in Manchester NH.

'Jared, RJ's adopted big brother no parents, 19 years old, lives on the streets of manch, basketball player.

'Rj, a girls of 16, Jareds adopted sister, no parents lives on the streets of manch with Jared, also plays basketball.

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Ouch! Jeez why can't I get this stupid move right!" I yell at my brother Jared as I once again attempt a 360 slam dunk, but end up falling on my butt...again. He's not actually my brother but we adopted each other after both of our parents died. He's 19 years old, chocolate, curly brown hair, 6'1 and has emerald green eyes. And I'm RJ, 16 years old, green and gold eyes, jet black hair, and almost to six feet tall.

" look ill show you again. You just need to add a little more spring to your jump" he says as he does it with ease. Man I'm jealous. "Ya but you know I can't jump off my left foot!" I scream in my frustration. Just then my best and only friend Leo comes around the parking lot where the hoops are, ready to play a quick scrimmage, good now I won't have to humiliate myself any more. "Hey guys what's up?" Leo says though he knows we've been working on the impossible 360. "Nothin really just fooling around." I say and glare at Jared daring him to speak. We
warm up a bit and talk for a while while we play. "Did you guys hear about the fire on elm street?" Leo asks. All of a sudden I trip and fall losing the ball, but Leo sees it coming...

(Flash back) burning house, screams, Jared carrying me to safety, life on the streets....(end flash back)

"Whoa, are you ok RJ?" Leo asks in a worried tone looking at me, I'm glad he cares but I haven't told him yet, and I don't plan to for a long time. "Ya I'm good just tripped on my shoe lace, I'm such a clutz!" Then everything went black.

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