Rewrite (update?)

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I've been thinking about rewriting this story for a while now, each part would come out slower than when I first updated this. But I feel that with knowing how to write a little better, I want to give it a change.
I would also love some opinions from you lovely readers.
What should I change? What do you want to see more of? Should I keep it all the same but rewrite it so it's longer and has better explanation?

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