Starfire a life on Tamaran

Now there is war part2

"Halt": Blackfire shouted to her army of Tramarans and the 1200 Humans who loaded their M4s and release "Get Into Battle": Blackfire shouted and watched the army disperse into the battleships

After less than an hour and a half, the battleships arrived in front of the moon

at 1:30 pm a.m

"Team Alpha comes from left's, Beta's right, Gamma from the front, and Alforg up front," said Flamd'r to Blackfire and the two other generals spread out to load and unlock AUG A3

2:45 am shortly before the fortress

"In 5 minutes we attack, we will surprise them and destroy TOTAL all the Pisons are beheaded in front of the camera and transfer into the whole Vega system so that we Tamerans fight against the chic of the Pisons and set a sign" cried Blackfire the Army cheers

2:59 a.m

"Attack": Blackfire shouted and pointed to the fortress
"we are being attacked": an enemy soldier screamed In the distance you can hear the dull rattling of the AUG and M4 Assaultrifles
Suddenly, a C4 blew up that gate of the fortress fly into the air The people and Tameranes were raiding

4:14 a.m

"General Flamd'r and Queen Blackfire the fortress is captured
we are now finishing the Pisons for execution "said a soldier
"Fantastic they are executing at 7 o'clock a.m." said Blackfire

6:59 a.m

"Now we put the tamaran people on the line with this execution WE will fight the pisons on and we will win for X'Hal": Blackfire shouted earnestly and made a sign
the soldiers shoot all the pisons through a clean headshot every 700 hundred pisons fall to the ground "LET THIS BE A TEACHING YOU SHIT MOTHERFUCKERS":
said Blackfire which is cheered by the army and the generals

back on Tamaran in the palace "FLAMD'R": Kori screamed full of joy and hugged him "Kori" he said and picked her up "I thought you would not come back," she said
"Oh your sister has taken care of me": he said and kissed Kori "Thanks": Kori said to her sister "You are not worthy that I have on Flamd'r eyesight but he also comes alone" said Blackfire sarcastic "I love you too, thanks": said kori to blackfire "come with me": pulls kori flamd'r on the arm we go shopping now

"Ohh look at the beautiful dress" said Kori and packed it "do you want to try it on first?": Asked Flamd'r "Uh, no, that will fit as well as if we do not buy a new one" said Kori full of joy when she was able to fly again "my feelings she is all over again I have my powers again": she cried out full of joy embraced Flamd'r and kissed him "I love you" "I love you too" said Flamd'r

late at night

"Ahhh I feel like a packbrogrof" said Flamd'r "oh come so much is not what you have to wear and you've done it anyway " she said and opened the door for Flamd'r on the whole put bags in a corner "I'm going to sleep now" said Flamd'r and lay down in Kori's bed, I'll go try on the dress quickly "said she and disappeared into the bathroom" Naa I did not tell you that it will fit " said kori and noticed that Flamd'r was already asleep "then show it to me tomorrow": she thought and pulled it out as she looked at herself in the mirror and started to think I am really pretty enough for him? she said to herself and went to bed with him "sleep sweetly my dearest" said Kori and fell asleep

as promised, I have the part made longer today and let me know in the comments what you think is Starfire (Koriand'r) nice enough for Flamd'r so I think so ;-)