the 'little fox'

chapter 2

When i awoke i wasn't at the Training grounds, i was in a bed. I Know it wasn't my bed as it was way to comftable, and it wasn't a Hospital bed it was too big. I then berried my head in to the soft pillow, picking up on a famillar scent. It smelled like home and the scent was a bitter-sweet kid of smell. I relised then that the scent belonged to sasuke, the feeling returned. It was at that Moment that the kyuubi started to Talk to me in my mind "k-kit i Know whats wrong with you" said the demon fox in a kind of guilty tone. Naruto then begun to question his motives "okay then tell me whats wrong then"

" well um, you're kinda in heat " he said

"EH WHAT THE BLOODY HELL KYU" naruto yelled. This couldn't be happening, could it? Why do these things only happen to him. 'Che' was all he needed to hear before turning his head towards the door only to lock eyes with a certain raven Haired friend my face lighting a bright that could could rival His cousin karin's hair. "Get out my way i need to check on him" speak of the devil. he and team 7 had met her about a year ago after naruto had managed to break Orochimaru's curse seal.
~~~~~~~~(Flash back)~~~~~~~~~~
Team 7 had just finished a c rank mission and was on their way back to Konoha walking at a steady speed when all of a sudden naruto had come to a halt a frown adopted his face this was unusual behaviour for the blond so sakura being the responsible one in her team decided to question it " naruto is every thing allri..." She was cut of as naruto had ran of at top speed into the forest they where walking by kakashi and sasuke looked at one another having a silent debate on who should go after the dobe. Sasuke was the one that ended up going after him only to come across naruto carrying a unconscious redhead on his back he looked up at sasuke his eyes tired and begging him not to question it but the wide idiotic fox grin tearing across his face ruined the look his eyes held and it was at that moment that the mysterious red head decided to stir in her sleep and made a slurred announcement of "itoko niisan" as she nuzzled her head into his chest. We walked back to kakashi sensei and sakura in silence, sakura looked at the red head in confusion and asked him who she was to which naruto replied "her name is karin...karin uzamaki" the announcement of her name brought a confused look to the usually calm jounin "I thought you where the last one" that brought a calm smile to his face not one of those ridicules 'I'm a complete idiot' grins but a genuine smile "I thought so to"
~~~~~~~~(end flashback)~~~~~~~~
Naruto then decided it would be a good idea to get out of sasuke's bed and away from the uchiha compound and backe to his apartment where he could just wait this wile thing out 'er kit I sorry to tell you this but it's not that easy' narutos face palled at that comment but not as much as he did for the second comment 'and kit since that you're a submissive type in nature you kinda need a dominant to top ya' naruto was about to make a break out the window before anyone started asking questions when he locked eyes with a curtain dominant raven haired uchiha
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So tell me what you think constructive criticism is allowed and sorry it took so long I've been in contact with someone to help me with the parts I'm to embarresed too and then there's the GCSE's going on and I may have accidentally deleted this chapter and I may have had to rewrite it so yea soz
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