Finding the light within

Chapter one : The day everything blew apart

It was the finals of the netball season and the two teams were head to head with ten points all. Brittany stood up from her spot and talked to her team to give them final encouragement.

" Look, I know that today 's game is a very tough one when we up ahead of the Blue Pies. This is only the first half we still have the other half to go, so we need to work in a team to in. Who's with me?"

Brittany glanced at her friend Sophie and they did a silent agreement. " I am" replied her friends.

And me

And me

And me

Slowly one by one, her team started to fill up the gaps of the game. Brittany smiled. Life was  perfect. The referee's whistle echoed in the hall as her team walked onto the court. Brittany stood in the centre and waited for the signal.

Beep! With her fast yet acute movements Brittany passed to her wing attack and her team quickly created and diamond. It was WA to GA to C and then in the circle ready for a goal. In it went as the 69 unicorns scored a goal. It was opposition centre. Brittany quickly moved to the goal attack. As the signal was blow, she moved immediately to the wing attack and stole the ball off the opposition.

Another goal. It was 11 to 12. This was it, one more minute and then victory will be the 69 unicorns.

Brittany's heart was pounding against her chest as she saw the referee blow the whistle.

5 4 3 2 1. The supporters of the 69 unicorns erupted into cheers as Brittany's team mates lifted her up on their shoulders. The trophy was passed to her as she lifted it up into the air.

As usual, Brittany waited for her mother's black mercedes benz to come rolling into the school grounds. When she saw it, she walked up to it and colsed the door.

" Mum, today was our grand final and we won. I'm so excited, i can't wait to tell dad."

" That's great dear. Now let's go home to talk about important things."

" Like what do we do on the weekends"

" no nothing like that dear, something much much more important for the whole family. And i mean everyone."

"Mum what do you mean."

" Oh darling don't worry. Everything gets serious when we get at home."

So guys what do you think about my story. Is it too cliche? Please vote and share your comments on this book. Also, i gave up on my other one the sharp eyes one coz i can't think of who should die, the mother or the brother. So enjoy this new story and keep updated.
XOXO Liz:)