this is my first story hear and a story that I made a while ago and I will need to apologise in advance cos ther ar non of this :.,;*''''?! simply cos I have no idea how to use them as you can see Im a noob at wrighting so if you could try to not give me hate but rather critisism that would be grate so hear gos
I was born and raised in the forests and wilderness trained to be a hunter from birth I trained every day of my live and didn’t know anything else but then one fateful day while I was training with my father tragedy struck.
A dark wizard had taken a liking to our forest and decided to conquer it. He came with his legions of every dark creature imaginable the forest had almost fallen but then hope came in the image of a man from the north we knew nothing of him and he knew nothing of us yet he helped us he was the strongest man we had ever seen and he had invented a new style of fighting never heard of before with his immense strength and dexterity he wielded his two mighty great swords with ease he swung them like he was wielding two short sword the speed and strength behind each swing was immense and when all hop was gone due to a beast so immense non of his swings had any effect on it.
He put one sword on his back and wielded the one in his hand and swung with all his might I saw that day strength I never thought existed with that one swing he generated a wind so strong it decimated all the dark creatures in front of him but it also clewed a mountain in have I ask him why he didn’t use it until one he answered with.
‘’This great strength also comes with a great cost and a great risk every time its performed it runs the risk of killing the wielder and everyone around him and you saw what happened to the mountain if I used it carelessly I would kill those I’m trying to protect’’
And with that in mind I never brought it up again. For soon it came time to face the dark wizard and end this madness we were on the verge of victory but then the dark wizard exclaimed let’s see how you fight without your eyesight oh great warrior of the north and cast a spell to blind the great warrior I couldn’t let it happen it was as if time slowed down when I ran towards my peoples savior jumped in the way of the blast and with that my eyesight was gone I couldn’t see a thing but I heard clearly like I had always done.
I heard the great warrior scream in grand furry and I heard his footsteps run towards the dark wizard and at the same time I heard him sheath his sword and I knew what he was gona do I tried to tell him to stop for it was too dangerous but he ignored me.
And with all his might he lifted his all mighty great sword up and swung with all his might clewing the dark wizard in half along with his entire fortress n the mountain behind it and the island behind the mountain they see it split for a whole minute and in that minute I heard nothing not even a mouse I feared that our savior had passed on from this life.
But then as I started to lose hop I heard him screaming for victory and then I felt him pick me up and say ‘’you are the true hero without you I would have gone blind and surly lost and as thinks I give you the power to sense the life-force of everything around you be it a giant undead or even a simple stone nothing will escape your senses but you will need to get used to it before it becomes useful until then everything will be a mess in your mind but when you get used to it you will see the world in such beauty you wont want to see again’’
And with a wave of his hand he cast a spell.
A spell I didn’t like for some time but I had hop that it would be better soon for his words were true and soon I wondered why I even needed sight in the first place the grate warrior helped us rebuild the forest and our town and as he had finest he went as quickly as he came and left us with only this words ‘’if you are ever in danger I will be there just like I have been there for every other town in this land’’ And with that I knew what I had to do I resumed my training and took a portal then a ship to Neverwinter you may be asking where I came from well it’s a little island named Iceland and were is Iceland you may ask well that’s another world which I’m not allowed to tell you about
The great warrior by Garwen
Proofread and edited by BillTheSomething
