Luan's Fear (Alternative Version of Lori's Redemption) (ON HIATUS)

Chapter One

After sending Lori off to jail after she severely beat up Lincoln for not agreeing to go on a double date with her. The Loud family all went home...to try and forget what happened. Leni...now the sibling that everyone looks up to..suggested that they have a sleep over, but Luan declined the offer. Mainly because she wanted to be alone. You see...Years ago, her older sister made a promise to always protect her, but then she did this. 

She couldn't believe that Lori could have done this. But then again...She started acting differently after she met him...Bobby Santiago who also started this mess when he dumped her after her brother said some things about his sister. As she laid her head down...She started to think of her sister...the one who alway there for her before the other version came out.

"What happened to you...Lori?" Luan said before she started to dream...unaware that she was about to have a vision of the future.

Luan's Dream:

Luan was in a void...a void of blackness which had no end in sight.

"H...Help!!" A voice cried.

"Hello...Is someone there?" Luan asked.

"Help Me....I'm going to die." The voice shouted. As Luan tried to follow the voice...She saw a light..a light that lead her to a scene that would haunt her for days to come. It was Lori..She had a tattered jail uniform and she had numerous marks on her...what's worse is that she could see the panic on her face as her cell flooded with water.

"LORI!!" Luan cried. She tried to get closer, but something made her stay in place...helpless to save her sister who was slowly drowning in water. As she stared on...She could only cry tears of sadness because her sister...no her protector...was going to die. As the water started to raise...Luan spotted two people coming over to Lori's cell. One of them was Lori's long term boyfriend...Bobby Santiago while the other was an unknown woman.

"Bobby..Help Me!!" Lori cried.

Luan thought that Bobby would surely help Lori...since he loved her however...that hope died once he started to laugh at her.

"Don't bother bitch...Bobby won't help you...You see...He wants you to die." The woman said.

"Bobby Boo Boo Bear...Is that true?" Lori asked when Bobby punched her on her left eye.

"Stop with the Bobby Boo Boo Bear crap...I stopped loving you long ago bitch. You see...I took out a policy on you for the amount of 500,000 dollars....Which I'll split with the Big Boss standing right beside me." Bobby said.

"Yeah...It was so simple...All I had to do was make sure that you would stay in this cell while the storm rages on..a storm that will surely drown you...which will make your death..a crime of circumstance." The woman said.

"Wait..You can't let me die...What about my family?" Lori cried.

"Oh Please...They hate you...I just needed to give you some encouragement to try to kill your brother. Which was why I dumped you after he talked shit about my sister...a sister who beats up any one who betrays her or her friends." Bobby Said.

"You planned this...You made me lose control of myself all because you wanted Money...You won't get away with this...when others hear about this then you're Butts are in big trouble." Lori said.

"Oh Lori....No one will know about this...Because the truth will die along with you." Bobby said as Lori tried to swim towards the surface. Before Luan could see what could happen next...The surroundings started to get blurry which made Luan panic.

"No!! I need to help Lori...Lori!!" Luan cried before...she woke up.

Dream End

When Luan woke up..she curled into herself and started to cry...she didn't know if what she saw would really happen, but she knew that she had to help her sister.

One way or another.

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