Percy Jackson... That kid?

The war

POV. Percy
Things were going so well. We had just arrived when Gaia's army was attacking and jumped into to help. Jason and Piper went to go help some Apollo kids fight a pack of hellhounds. Leo was on Festus' back throwing some Greek fire bombs he made on the Argo 11. Hazel and Frank went to go aide the Romans who had finally settled things with the Greeks. Annabeth and I went to go fight Gaia head on. After all it was our fault that she rose. Stupid nose bleed. After Tar- that place her Yankees cap was working again. Guess that was her mom's way of apologizing. I'm getting off track stupid ADHD. Anyway Annabeth came up with a plan for us to beat Gaia. She put her cap on and snuck behind Gaia invisible while I distracted her. I was getting kinda tired but Gaia hadn't even broken into a sweat. That's when Annabeth stuck a knife into her chest. It wasn't her original knife she lost that in the pit. Back to the topic at had when Annabeth had driven the knife in Gaia's chest I thought we had pretty much won. Then Gaia just laughed and riled the knife out with a vine growing to replace the wound. She grabbed Annabeth from behind, her cap falling off her when Gaia picked her up. She began to choke her in front of me. "Gaia! Put her down!" I was so mad all I saw was red. I needed to protect her. "As you wish demigod." She called back to me calmly. She then proceeded to snap Annabeth's neck and toss her like a rag doll. "No! Annabeth!" I felt like part of me was ripped away. I turned back to Gaia. "What are you going to do with your girlfriend, Jackson?" She was just taunting me trying to make me mad. It was working. I ran towards her oblivious to all the other fights going on around me. A hurricane began and it lifted Gaia and me off the the ground. "What are you doing?! Put me back on the ground!" Gaia was yelling profusely and she was beginning to see what I was doing. I ignored not really knowing what was going on, all I knew was that I needed to end her. We then fell into an intense combat. I was slashing Riptide at her and she just ducked. We went back and forth for a while. I was subconsciously keeping us off the ground and it wasn't until later that I saw the flaw in her defense. I slashed at her chest putting Riptide through her. She looked down and began to crumble to dirt. When I fell back down to the ground, losing my control over the hurricane, I ran to Annabeth's body. I was hugging her and crying telling her not to go. I felt strong hands pull me back and I just began to blindly fight them. I then realized it was my dad. "I'm sorry my son, she's gone." My dad said solemnly. I could feel the other gods eyes on me wondering how I'm going to react. I just lost all my adrenaline and collapsed. I felt strong hands pick me and and that's the last thing I felt before everything went black.

When I woke up the light blinded my eyes. I quickly shut them again. Then I slowly opened them and let them adjust to the light. When I could look around I realized I was in the infirmary. My first thought was 'where's  Annabeth?' Then I remember what happened during the war. It was smirk I was watching he die all over agin. I felt so broken. I heard the door open and saw Will walk in. 'At least he survived'. "How do you feel?" Was the first thing he asked. "Like I was hit by a bus, what happened?" I just noticed the pounding in my head and how limp all my limbs felt. "Yeah, well that's what happens when you over exert yourself. You need lots of rest, but unfortunately the gods asked you to go to Olympus so I'm going to help you." Great now I have to go put up with my annoying Aunt and Uncles and a Drama Queen. Fun. "I'm not sure I can put up with them." Was my great response. "Well that sucks." He said them he proceeded to lift me up until I was steady on my feet. When I was stable I took a full assessment of my injuries. I noticed I had my left arm in a cast, along with bandages wrapped around my torso. "You sure know how to screw up your body, don't you?" Will said when he saw what I was doing. "Shut up and just help me to Olympus."  I wasn't really ready to put up with everyone so soon after losing Annabeth. When Will got me to Argus he said that I should be fine to walk myself into the building. After the long car ride in silence I found myself outside the Empire State Building. When I walked up to the guy at the desk he just gave me the key and I proceeded to the elevator. The whole elevator ride was spent with my eyes screwed up trying to fight down a flashback. When I got to the throne room I had finally calmed down my breathing. I'm walked in and the room fell into silence. "Peruses Jackson!" Zeus boomed. "You are once again a hero. And we are giving you three wishes as we know you will not except godhood. What will they be?" I had already been thinking about them and I knew what I had wanted. "One I want Hades and Hestia to have thrones on Olympus." As soon as the words left my mouth two thrones appeared, one was an obsidian color and seemed to radiate death. The other was the exact opposite and was a light white that had a warm glow to it. "Second I wish for a portal in Camp Half-blood and Camp Jupiter. We have now met and there is no point in keeping us separate." Hestia snapped her fingers. "It is done." This was the wish I knew was necessary for me. "And for my last wish, I wish to be cut off from all the gods." This was meet with many gasps of shock. "You do realize that by separating yourself from us we can't help you in any situation you get yourself into and we also cannot remove your scent?" Athena asked. She was now ok with me after I fell into that place for Annabeth. "Yes, I am aware of that." "Very well." My dad said. He was not too pleased with having to leave his only son. He shrunk down to a normal size. "I wish you the best of luck my son and if you ever need help you can take this wish back." My father said. "I know, but I need this." Then I was suddenly flashed outside my moms apartment. I knocked on the door and waited for it to open. It was opened after a minute and I saw...

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