Hey guys so for some of you that are confused. I'm rewriting.
The story will take place when the characters are older and it will flash back from time to time to when they were younger.
And I would love if you guys would comment your thoughts on how I can improve the story. I will try and take everyone's thoughts in to consideration.
And please if I make a mistake in spelling or grammar let me know. But please don't be rude and make me feel dumb about it, I'm human and I make mistakes.
I've kinda been in writers block for the last year.. But lately I've been inspired.
So I hope you all like it.. And remember criticism can be constructive so I will take what you give me.
thanks guysEnjoy
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The Quarterbacks girl
Romance" I was pooled with emotions. I was angry, sad, and ashamed of myself for letting the only girl I ever loved slip right through my fingers. I was such a god damn foul for ever letting this perfect women go. You know what they say, 'You never know wh...