Angels and Demons have always held a feud. A constant battle between life and death. As time goes by people grow old and die but depending on who you were and what you did while living chooses the path you go down.
Heaven and Hell. If you were a good person or have done good deeds while living you have the honor, the privilege to go through the gates. If you were a cruel and hateful person you are forced into the pit that burns under the living's feet. The constant battle between life and death.
Angels will praise you as you enter the gates but Demons will torture you as you scream from constant ripping and tearing of the flesh off your bones. The only ones who survive the pit are the righteous of the few. The ones who break. Get off the rack only to put souls on. The man who must rise from perdition and saved by an angel of the lord. This man will reunite with the living inly to cause the pain and suffering of countless others. A man with the power to never stop helping people, to save them from the torture he went through and caused. Only the death of loved ones does he relies that he belongs doing what he was born to do. Only after death does he relies that he had everything he needed at his fingertips. Only after, does he give his vessel to the next. To live a new life as a different man. Away from death, away from the life he once knew. After all is lost and all is forgotten, he was never truly out. The dangers of real life struck him as his old life flashed before his eyes. As he finally understood that life was not truly over after the last breath was taken.
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