This is my first story so please dont judge me just comment on it and tell me how you feel about it.
Hi my name is Shonte i am only thirthteen years old and is the youngers out of all my sister and brother. I live with my mama and some times I would go visted my daddy when I am not doing nothning.I also am so exiected because I am going to a new school and will be able to meet new people I also hope this school year will go good.
First day of school/eight grade when I first walked into my school I felt very good about it, but anyway so there i was walking into my school seening all different kind of people. I walked into the office to ask them my teacher name and the class room number so when they gave it to me i started looking for my class. I walked up the stairs to see if it was up there cause it wasent on the first floor but as soon as I turn the coner there go my class room number right there room 129 a mix class. As soon as I walked into my class everbody started looking at me like is that are new class mate if it is i wonder what is her name. But when i told the teacher i was a new student in his class he told me i could take any seat I would want. So when I pick my seat i sat next to a boy , but as soon as i sat down he look at me and ask me what was my name so I told him my name is shonte and he was like that is a pretty name and then I ask him what was his name and he said that his name was josph and i was like O i use to know a name boy joseph. But the boy I use to know was a jerk he use to always cheat on his girl friend and so on. But i ask josph did he ever cheat on his girl friend and he said no. So then josph ask me did i want him to hang around me all day to show me all my teachers and all my classes and i answered him with a yes, and so the day went on but at the end of the day josph huge me and said you is a very nice person and I hope we meet again.
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