HIST. FIC RESULTS !!

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and so marks the end of ace awards first edition!!

Judged by the awesome MooonYagami

first place:
The Pharaoh's Lotus, Azukiel.

" I knew it was a winning story the moment i began reading it. A relevant blurb, good vocabulary, good grammar, good flow, good character development, good chapter length there is nothing about the story that's unpleasant. The war stories are always intriguing so there's the plot though it's a bit rapey in awkward places. As for the writing style, your descriptions are to die for i'll give you that but... owing to your soft heart you have created a friendly atmosphere though it should have been more strict. Anyway, its the first time i actually read the whole story and voted for every single chapter so you can tell how much i am looking forward to rest of your story. Thank you for your hard work. Happy writing :') "

second place:
A Helpless Situation, Lenacaraofficial

" Yaa ~ what could be a better historical plot than the political disturbances that actually shaped the course of our ruling elites today. Political corruptions, dirty affairs, pistol duels, undermining your faithful partner and then getting forgiven in lieu of your true love for eachother, the story brings back so much, this has to be read, lesson driven home_ Beauty is deceptive. Grammar, flow, writing style,  nothing to be complained about except chapters are a bit too short. One thing i personally got depressed was the lack of character description, yes the characters are famous but that's all the more reason to describe their sketches, throw in some pictures here and there no? But the story is indeed lovable. So the readers are all thankful i just know it.  "

third place:
blue bells & hanging ropes, MissLacybee

" So we have a reverse harem plot that's equally popular with both animes and mangas these days. Every woman wants to be a princess, liked by every guy around and attracting a bit of negative attention by envious people as well. This is the true nature of our world. You have well maintainend the linear flow but i was particularly drawn to the way you have written the story, it's neat and leaves a mark. A bit of proof reading would do you some good though. Still chapter length is satisfying and characters are all individually identifiable plus picture contribute the plus plus. Thank you for your hard work. Happy writing :') "

first r.u:
(same no. of points)

Zanilla, heartofemotion

" Yo princess you are brimming with creativity, you've achieved perfection with your character development, pictures n everything it felt so fluffy. The plot is impressive no matter how you slice it. Blood, gore, faithful warrior servants, spoiled beautiful royals, ruthless killings and betrayals, it's unfortunate human history that does exist. Grammar is as straight as fermat's light principle, hope you'll get used to of it as you keep writing more. Story is unevenly paced at some place dude plus chapters are a little short and end abruptly owing to your dramatic style of expressing scenarios. Though the same drama paints a vivid picture of the scenes we are intending to view that's solid and well directed. Arigatou. Happy writing :')"

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Asteria, Shadow_wishes

" Okay honey you have selected an admirable plot destitution and power abuse though there are some disturbingly gruesome scenes. Poverty begets hellfire and people drunk on their authorities endorse violence and tyranny so that's settled. You have stunningly given emotional depth to your writing but a few minor bugs here n there need fixing_ tenses, missing words and such. You are super creative, the curiosity picks height more and more with every chapter, flow is well balanced but some chapters are a bit short and length is asymmetric. Character sketches are not usually drawnable from 3 chapters only so that's not your fault. Over all, your hardworking Goldilocks is an inspiring  idol. Best wishes :') "

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