Repairing a Animatronic Heart

Chapter 1

Jamie and the rest of the seniors at her High School ran out out 'Timber Wood High.' She was excited to finally go to college but unfortunately didn't have the money to go, she sighed and looked down at her feet."What's wrong Jamie?" Loretta asked."Nothing." Jamie said in a soft voice."Come on what's wrong? Tell me I'm sure I can help you." Loretta smiled."Loretta it's just, you know I don't have enough money to go to college." Jamie frowned."Don't worry Jamie! I can get you a job!" Loretta said, cheerfully."You can?" Jamie's eyes widen."Of course I can, My Uncle retired from this pizzeria, as a security guard and well the owners need one." Loretta explained."Where is it at?" Jamie smiled."Uhh..It's called Freddy Fazbear's Pizza I guess? But Um... are you sure you wanna work there?" Loretta raised a brow."Absolutely!!" she said with excitement."Okay then i will call you tomorrow and see if they are available!" Loretta smiled still thinking of the decision her friend had made with a place that had a horrible incident. She knew what had happened that year where her uncle was bitten ( I made it up but the 'Bite of 87' is part of the FNaF game )he survived but had did have the same life he did before the incident caused by the Pirate Fox,
Foxy.
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Jamie entered the old Pizza Parlor and saw children enjoying the show. She smiled and ran across a teenage boy that was her age,"Watch where your going ?!" The boy called out."Jamie looked up at the tall boy," I'm so sorry I didn't mean to I-" the boy quickly replied to her," I'm sorry... I'm just sorry I didn't mean too... its just not my day." The teenager sighed."Your fine but what's wrong?" She asked." It's just I lost my sister and I can't find her.." He groaned." Well where was the last time you saw her and Jamie Kingston " She struck her hand out." Adrian Rivers." He shook her hand." Well umm... If I see her I will tell you as soon as possible!" Jamie said, beginning to walk towards the office." Yeah well if you seem to find her here is a picture and my phone number." He said heading outside. She knocked on the door.
Knock
Knock
Knock
"Come in." The male voice called. Jamie entered and shut the door behind her reveling the office with a pizza odor coming from the kitchen and saw a man in a suit sitting patiently with his hands folded." Hello My name is Jamie Kingston." She greeted the man." Nice to meet you, I'm Mr. Hunter I will lead you to your job but before any magic can happen I need you to sign here." he said, as he took a pen from his desk and handing her a packet. She took a seat and began writing letters in cursive..
J-A-M-I-E K-I-N-G-S-T-O-N
She took her time and scanned some words from the packet she was given. Meanwhile, Mr. Hunter looked at her she was beautiful. He looked at her hair, it was red as an apple, her eyes were brown but very different from other girls, and finally her body, she was in shape since she was the school cheerleader camp.
Mr. Hunter looked at her and couldn't resist kissing her lips (basically what I'm trying to say is this guy is a perve)"Done!" Jamie hit the pen against the desk."Alright lets go check the animatronics." He stood up and lead Jamie to the exit giving him a chance to smell her strawberry scented hair.

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