why this was flawed from day 1

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Hello. I am the writer of Busted Knee caps. As many of you may know, this story deals with depressive issues with loss. I wanted to wright the different ways that people deal with lossing loved ones and how age can effect it.

But it was flawed.

There was nothing to actually stove for. This story takes alot for me to wright and leads me, into a hole where I'm not happy for many days. So this will be discontinued for my own mental health.

The ending.

I wanted to have Dialo, after being consumed by anger at Etihw, for the lose of Chelan. Her face was burned (evident by the chapter looking into the eyes of hecking yosaf,) she would become the new devil. Having another war take place, with a adult cast of characters. Kcalb would be an angel, but would not remember Etihw at all. And have a moment where he's like "fam. I'm not him. I may have been him, but I'm not now."

I wanted to have these ideas that you can grow from hardship. Yes Etihw was going to remember Kcalb, but see it foundly. So it would contrast with Dialo. Yeah deep crap.

But it didn't have a reason to get good. I could have made one, but it risked the somber mood.

I haven't given up on story wrighting. Hell I'm developing a comic, that has some darker tones but it's a comedy. I apologize for not finishing this. I hoped you enjoyed what you read until now.

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⏰ Last updated: Feb 03, 2020 ⏰

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