Mansion Murder

Chapter 1 (Remake)

        -Welp, here it is! My remake of Chapter one. I hope you all enjoy this remake and please do give me some feedback after it. I would like your opinions on it so far especially with how well it is vs. the old version. Thanks for everything and enjoy reading!!-

          It was the afternoon as the sun was at its peak within the sky. The weather was perfect for any normal day for a family or couple to go out for a picnic. If not that, then a walk within a park enjoying life... But life was not ordinary for a couple of people that we're driving towards the outskirts of the city. While today was peaceful, things aren't all hunky-dory for everyone within Owring city. The town always had something going on day or night, no matter what or who. One thing is for sure that the police departments are busy every day due to the actions of the underground market. 

         The market consists of the most dangerous and infamous criminals known to man as they preform illegal activities messy or not. It consists of numerous sections that operate in different unlawful actions. To the North, a wealthy part of the crime ring that is infested with crime lords/ Yakuza's of different races as it branches out to the cities gaining territory for their businesses. To the East are the drug cartels where they provide various liquids, powders, etc. to the lovely addicts of the world. However, to the west upholds other smuggling rings such as jewels of other countries, exotic people, and then some. This place in general besides the South is the busy's due to having people waiting to sell-off others for money. Since there are exotic items (Jewels, People, Fabric, contraband, etc.), everyone would auction it off for profits and or want to get more slaves. Finally, there is the south district in which specializes in finding underlings for jobs and also assassins/ mercenaries for hire. It's the most brutal part of the crime syndicate due to having the most hitman/ woman and blood spilled since this place is also where the dead are exposed. No matter how many times police force thinks, they caught them red-handed they get tricked easily. However, various reports indicate parties between connections of the underground all over the world getting caught or killed. Some less gruesome than others, if not worse. Those found alive were lucky; however, they don't live for a long time while being hospitalized. The only thing those criminals say before dying was Puppeteer... That 's it.

          Beyond that, most of the underground markets know about the Puppeteer's doing. It has been going around within the East and North districts of the crime syndicate. Not only that, but it has been presented on the News every day going over the latest sites. Things have been tense within both places (underground and city) now that everyone has put up more defenses for everything. Just like this place that this limo is going to. Inside are four people.. all apart of the crime syndicate. Everyone is apart of different areas as there was a Yakuza leader, a Brutal Mercenary, a High-class thief, and a talented hacker. Each person with their skills, personalities, and jobs... all dangerous and deadly. Within the limo, there was a thick tense atmosphere that coated the air. Everyone was on edge since they never knew each other, nor do they know about their host. All of the guests who got invited to this party had gotten a mysterious invitation from their host Diamond. Each request had stated...

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         "Hello, Sir/Madame. My name is Diamond, and I have the privilege to ask you mister/miss to become a lucky guest at my party. A particular party that will provide with the top of the line food, drinks, and most of all, and a unique gift near the end. That gift will pique the interest in most, if not all, of you. Everyone here has something that they want or need... so why not let me provide it for you within my festivity if you let me."

Address: XXXXXX-XXXXX-XX

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          Thus here we are with these four men waiting to get to their destination... however, no one not even the host knows what's to come next for the party guest as a sinister sadistic smile plants itself upon a pale skinny face as they stare at computer screens. They were watching everything unfold within the car, at the destination, and the guests that have already arrived for the fiesta.

"Hehehe... What an exciting group we have here today. Don't you think... Puppeteer?"