After Dawn Broke *Continuation of Twilight*

I'm New To Fanfic Writing So Please No Hate However I Do Love To Recieve Advice On How To Improve My Writing. There Is A Little Blood But Nothing Too Gruesome In This Chapter So Enjoy:)

 Alice's POV

I was in Seattle’s newest mall shopping, as per usual, when I saw this girl. She was heading into the changing rooms with the complete wrong combination of clothes for the next season, I quickly skipped into the changing rooms after her and pulled back her curtain to see this other guy on the floor and blood everywhere. Her blue eyes sparkled at me whilst the blood around her mouth made me cautious and I could tell she was upset with herself by her stance. “I-I Didn’t Mean To Hurt Him. He Came To Close And I……” I interrupted her.  “Do You Want Help? I Know A Way Of Controlling This Urge” Confusion flooded her eyes as she looked me up and down. Jasper must have heard me talking because he appeared in the changing room next to me and sent waves of calm throughout the small room. “You Know About Vampires? Please If You Do Please Could You Help? I-I Don’t Want To Do This Anymore.” Jasper answered for me, He was better at handling Newborns than I was but was she a Newborn? Her eyes were blue, she had a heart beat, pink colour skin...She couldn’t be. It would be impossible. “Well if you really want our help you may have it but it will be difficult you know that. Go and get cleaned up with Alice I will take care of the body.” Jasper’s voice made him sound so in control of this situation. The girl slowed moved towards me, I smiled and tried to keep her out of Human sight whilst looking for the toilets. I didn’t know how on earth Jasper would be able to get rid of a dead body and all that blood in a public place, I knew if anything was going to happen my visions would inform me. How come they didn’t tell me about this? Wait. Heart beat. Pink skin. Human coloured eyes. I instantly knew what she was, a Hybrid just like my niece. Inside the toilets was intense, a Human could walk in at anytime and see us. We had to be quick.